The diagrams illustrate the flood situation in a village and two different methods to cure the problem.
In general, it is apparent that the flooding area is the place where the river A intersects the river B. Besides, there are two solutions recommended, including relocating core areas of the village, and building dams.
As can be seen in the picture, the area considerably affected by floods is located in the place where the rivers A and B are interconnected. It is also obvious that floods have an adverse effect on existing buildings, including the industrial park, residential area, and commercial buildings.
The first solution suggested to overcome the challenge is to relocate areas suffering from floods. The industrial park and residential area, in particular, are repositioned northward, while the commercial buildings are moved in the opposite direction. The relocation demands a high cost, but it protects the natural environment.
The second method is that two reservoirs and dams are constructed at the headwaters of the rivers A and B. The method is more affordable, even though the land can be negatively affected.
- The maps below show a plan of the city in 1950 and at the present 73
- The diagram shows how chocolate is produced Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant 11
- Some people say that economic growth is the only way to end hunger and poverty while others say that economic growth is damaging the environment so it must be stopped Discuss both views and give your opinion 89
- The diagram below shows how instant noodles are manufactured Summaries the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant 11
- The diagrams give information about changes in a student s accommodation 61
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 20, Rule ID: ADMIT_ENJOY_VB[1]
Message: This verb is used with the gerund form: 'suggested overcoming'.
Suggestion: suggested overcoming
...ercial buildings. The first solution suggested to overcome the challenge is to relocate areas suff...
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Line 7, column 253, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...gs are moved in the opposite direction. The relocation demands a high cost, but it ...
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Line 9, column 1, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...it protects the natural environment. The second method is that two reservoirs an...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, first, if, second, so, while, in general, in particular
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 7.0 200% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 1.00243902439 200% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 6.8 118% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.15609756098 158% => OK
Pronoun: 6.0 5.60731707317 107% => OK
Preposition: 16.0 33.7804878049 47% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 5.0 3.97073170732 126% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 965.0 965.302439024 100% => OK
No of words: 182.0 196.424390244 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.3021978022 4.92477711251 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.67297393991 3.73543355544 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.09434334771 2.65546596893 117% => OK
Unique words: 108.0 106.607317073 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.593406593407 0.547539520022 108% => OK
syllable_count: 301.5 283.868780488 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.45097560976 117% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 7.0 4.33902439024 161% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.07073170732 280% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 3.0 0.482926829268 621% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 8.94146341463 112% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 22.4926829268 80% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 25.8203408188 43.030603864 60% => OK
Chars per sentence: 96.5 112.824112599 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.2 22.9334400587 79% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.5 5.23603664747 143% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 3.83414634146 130% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 3.0 1.69756097561 177% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 1.13902439024 439% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.124920773945 0.215688989381 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.05219734083 0.103423049105 50% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0607854345718 0.0843802449381 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0831488917128 0.15604864568 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0703750241121 0.0819641961636 86% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.6 13.2329268293 95% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.75 61.2550243902 73% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 10.3012195122 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.46 11.4140731707 118% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.56 8.06136585366 119% => OK
difficult_words: 58.0 40.7170731707 142% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.4329268293 96% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.9970731707 84% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 11.0658536585 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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