The diagrams below show how floods happen in a village and give two solutions to deal with them.
The diagrams below illustrate the current flood situation in the village along with two recommendations to solve the problem.
In general, it can be seen that the flooding area was created by the intersection between river A and river B. Two possible cure are suggested for tackling the problem by relocating the areas and using dams to prevent the flood.
The flood happens by the interconnection of rivers A and B where two river flow connect at the center point, so the flood soon appears. The happening flood caused various potential damage for local areas such as industrial parks, commercial buildings, and residential areas.
There are two ideal solutions to fix the problem. The first option is repositioning 3 main areas; while industrial park and residential area are removed and transported northward to the headwater of river A, commercial buildings are repositioned to the opposite direction away from the flooding area. Although the idea of relocation contributes to the preservation of the environment, it costs a small fortune for relocating fees.
Secondly, dams and reservoirs are built and placed at the west and north, respectively. Although the cost is low and affordable, it affects land negatively.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, second, secondly, so, while, in general, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.0 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 6.8 147% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 4.0 5.60731707317 71% => OK
Preposition: 22.0 33.7804878049 65% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 3.97073170732 176% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1039.0 965.302439024 108% => OK
No of words: 196.0 196.424390244 100% => OK
Chars per words: 5.30102040816 4.92477711251 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.74165738677 3.73543355544 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.0695592318 2.65546596893 116% => OK
Unique words: 120.0 106.607317073 113% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.612244897959 0.547539520022 112% => OK
syllable_count: 314.1 283.868780488 111% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 1.53170731707 196% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.07073170732 280% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 3.36585365854 30% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 8.94146341463 112% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 22.4926829268 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 51.7286187714 43.030603864 120% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.9 112.824112599 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.6 22.9334400587 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.0 5.23603664747 115% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 3.83414634146 130% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 1.13902439024 351% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.195745093435 0.215688989381 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0801384549286 0.103423049105 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0895593316441 0.0843802449381 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.119158824457 0.15604864568 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.10367727737 0.0819641961636 126% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.3 13.2329268293 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 61.2550243902 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.3012195122 104% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.46 11.4140731707 118% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.09 8.06136585366 113% => OK
difficult_words: 56.0 40.7170731707 138% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.4329268293 96% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.9970731707 87% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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