The diagrams below show how houses can be protected in areas which are prone to flooding.
The diagram compares two different methods of defences for homes which are at risk of being flooded.
OVerall, the key difference between the diagrams is that they show flood protection with and without a stopbank.Moreover, the at-risk home is raised on stilts above ground level.
The first diagram shows how a stopbank acts as a flood barrier to stop river water from flooding homes.The stp[bank is a small mound of land which is higher than the 100-year flood level , and halt the river from bursting its banks.Nearby houses can be built on stilts to prevent flooding from rainwater , and a floodgate beneath the stopbank can be opened all the water from internal ponding out when it is full .
When there is no stopbank , as shown in the second diagram , the will be nothing to stop the river from flooding . In this case , the solution is to put buildings on stilts, The height of the stilts is measured so that the floor of the house is 300mm above the 100-year flood level
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: Moreover
... protection with and without a stopbank.Moreover, the at-risk home is raised on stilts ...
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...ut a stopbank.Moreover, the at-risk home is raised on stilts above ground level. ...
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...s raised on stilts above ground level. The first diagram shows how a stopbank a...
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...to stop river water from flooding homes.The stp[bank is a small mound of land which...
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... is higher than the 100-year flood level , and halt the river from bursting its ba...
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... halt the river from bursting its banks.Nearby houses can be built on stilts to preven...
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...tilts to prevent flooding from rainwater , and a floodgate beneath the stopbank ca...
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...rom internal ponding out when it is full . When there is no stopbank , as show...
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...internal ponding out when it is full . When there is no stopbank , as shown in ...
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... is full . When there is no stopbank , as shown in the second diagram , the wi...
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...topbank , as shown in the second diagram , the will be nothing to stop the river f...
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... nothing to stop the river from flooding . In this case , the solution is to put b...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, moreover, second, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 7.0 200% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 1.00243902439 299% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 3.0 6.8 44% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.15609756098 190% => OK
Pronoun: 6.0 5.60731707317 107% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 33.7804878049 83% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.97073170732 76% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 805.0 965.302439024 83% => OK
No of words: 171.0 196.424390244 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.70760233918 4.92477711251 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.61617157096 3.73543355544 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.55113714245 2.65546596893 96% => OK
Unique words: 103.0 106.607317073 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.602339181287 0.547539520022 110% => OK
syllable_count: 222.3 283.868780488 78% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 8.0 4.33902439024 184% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.482926829268 414% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 3.36585365854 30% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 5.0 8.94146341463 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 34.0 22.4926829268 151% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 113.704177584 43.030603864 264% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 161.0 112.824112599 143% => OK
Words per sentence: 34.2 22.9334400587 149% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.2 5.23603664747 118% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 14.0 1.69756097561 825% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 3.70975609756 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.13902439024 263% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.09268292683 24% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.206750272825 0.215688989381 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.107430970175 0.103423049105 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0454143016405 0.0843802449381 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.124216201964 0.15604864568 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0325432076888 0.0819641961636 40% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.9 13.2329268293 135% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 62.35 61.2550243902 102% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 10.3012195122 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.63 11.4140731707 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.09 8.06136585366 100% => OK
difficult_words: 30.0 40.7170731707 74% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 17.0 11.4329268293 149% => OK
gunning_fog: 15.6 10.9970731707 142% => OK
text_standard: 18.0 11.0658536585 163% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.