The given flow chart illustrate the life cycle of silkworm as well as the stages of how the silk clothes are produced.
Overall, silkworm cycle stages last for 16 days and it takes Four steps to form a silkworm. It starts form eggs and end up being a moth. However, silk clothes production steps are easier.
In the first diagram, firstly the silkworm lays egg in a mulberry leaf and it last for 10 days to form a silkworm lava which feed in a mulberry leaf. After four to six weeks it turns into a silk thread where the larva stays and it remains for three to eight days and converts into cocoon and finally after 16 days it completely truns into a silkworm and starts its lifecycle again.
To form a silk clothes, the cocoon are carefully selected and boiled in water.They are then unwind into a thread into 300 to 900m, before they are twisted and woven into dye to make silk cloth.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 79, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'lasts'?
Suggestion: lasts
...worm lays egg in a mulberry leaf and it last for 10 days to form a silkworm lava whi...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...into a silk thread where the larva stays and it remains for three to eight days a...
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Line 7, column 79, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: They
... carefully selected and boiled in water.They are then unwind into a thread into 300 ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, first, firstly, however, if, then, well, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.0 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 6.8 132% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 9.0 5.60731707317 161% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 23.0 33.7804878049 68% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 732.0 965.302439024 76% => OK
No of words: 165.0 196.424390244 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.43636363636 4.92477711251 90% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.58402463422 3.73543355544 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.17925775689 2.65546596893 82% => OK
Unique words: 89.0 106.607317073 83% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.539393939394 0.547539520022 99% => OK
syllable_count: 213.3 283.868780488 75% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 8.94146341463 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 22.4926829268 102% => OK
Sentence length SD: 65.5083730433 43.030603864 152% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.571428571 112.824112599 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.5714285714 22.9334400587 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.57142857143 5.23603664747 164% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 1.69756097561 177% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.09268292683 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.291397737162 0.215688989381 135% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.150044705447 0.103423049105 145% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.115923801982 0.0843802449381 137% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.201594030556 0.15604864568 129% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.112958480675 0.0819641961636 138% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.3 13.2329268293 85% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 73.51 61.2550243902 120% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 10.3012195122 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.77 11.4140731707 77% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.65 8.06136585366 95% => OK
difficult_words: 30.0 40.7170731707 74% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 11.4329268293 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.9970731707 102% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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