The most effective method to developing and improving health is considered to be daily exercise. In my opinion, I agree that exercise is the key to health. However, I also believe that diet is important to remain healthy.
Regular physical exercise keeps our Mind and body active and good mind and active body will helps us to remain healthy and do our work in a good manner. However, we will be able to perform better in our work and study. It will also help us to improve our grades. For example, In my own experience, one of my friend in college named sima. She was extremely Fat and due to her weight she tends to be lazy and can't do much better in her work also she was not much confident due to her weight . she used to hide from everyone and stay alone but once she started doing regularexercise and loose her weight . she gained her confidence back and start doing good in her work and study.
Moreover, i believe not only physical exercise but diet also plays vital role on improving heath. regular dieting can reduce our diseases. For example if a person suffers form diabeties they have to take a regular dieting and start eating food with less sugar.
For instance, Regular dieting and regular exercise lead to a good health. It will make person happier and strong at the same time. Therefore, in this essay i agree with doing regular exercise but i also believe diet plays a major role in health.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: help
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Message: Did you mean 'can't' or 'cannot'?
Suggestion: can't; cannot
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Suggestion: She
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Message: Did you mean 'lose' (= miss, waste, suffer the loss etc.)?
Suggestion: lose
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Suggestion: She
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Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
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Suggestion: Regular
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Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, moreover, so, therefore, for example, for instance, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 18.0 10.4138276553 173% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 34.0 24.0651302605 141% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 28.0 41.998997996 67% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1163.0 1615.20841683 72% => OK
No of words: 256.0 315.596192385 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.54296875 5.12529762239 89% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.33439222413 2.80592935109 83% => OK
Unique words: 132.0 176.041082164 75% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.515625 0.561755894193 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 375.3 506.74238477 74% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 34.0798121144 49.4020404114 69% => OK
Chars per sentence: 72.6875 106.682146367 68% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.0 20.7667163134 77% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.5625 7.06120827912 79% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 12.0 5.01903807615 239% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.146341647454 0.244688304435 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0542341028919 0.084324248473 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0582473567605 0.0667982634062 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.106392585553 0.151304729494 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0559687877565 0.056905535591 98% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.0 13.0946893788 61% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 50.2224549098 127% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 11.3001002004 74% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.76 12.4159519038 71% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.08 8.58950901804 82% => OK
difficult_words: 43.0 78.4519038076 55% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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