The diagrams illustrate the phases and appliances which are used to make cement and the methods are utilized in the production of concrete for the aims of construction.
In general, the cement-making process is a 5-step linear process, begins at crushing limestone and clay together and ends at packing the cements. Moreover, the concrete process happens to put the ingredients together in a mixer. Both of them are man-made processed.
According to the cement production process, there are 2 main components, which are clay and limestone. First of all, the factors are crushed together, is produced powder. Then, the powder is transferred into a mixer and rotating heater. The next stage puts the powder into a grinder to become cemented. Finally, the cement is packed together in bags to become cemented bags.
Following the cement production process, the concrete production has 4 main constituents includes cement which has made in the previous process. After that, sand, water, gravel and cement are mixed together in a concrete mixer to produce concrete. To make concrete, the highest percentage of ingredient is gravel, which is 50%. One-fourth of the concrete is sand, reaches the second highest proportion. The cement accounts for 15%. The lowest is water, which is just one-tenth in concrete.
- The charts below show the changes in ownership of electrical appliances and amount of time spent doing housework in households in one country between 1920 and 2019 Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons 73
- The diagrams below show the stages and equipment used in the cement making process and how cement is used to produce concrete for building purposes Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant 87
- Some people say that now that we can see films at our home there is no need to go to the cinema Others say that to be fully enjoyed films need to be seen in a theatre Discuss both these views and give your own opinion 56
- The graph and chart below give information about 3D cinema screens and film release Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparison where relevant 78
- The graph and chart below give information about 3D cinema screens and film release Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparison where relevant 85
Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, first, moreover, second, then, in general, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 7.0 229% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 6.8 103% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.15609756098 190% => OK
Pronoun: 2.0 5.60731707317 36% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 33.7804878049 89% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.97073170732 151% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1103.0 965.302439024 114% => OK
No of words: 209.0 196.424390244 106% => OK
Chars per words: 5.27751196172 4.92477711251 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.80221413058 3.73543355544 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.80283144439 2.65546596893 106% => OK
Unique words: 109.0 106.607317073 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.521531100478 0.547539520022 95% => OK
syllable_count: 330.3 283.868780488 116% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 11.0 4.33902439024 254% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 8.94146341463 168% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 22.4926829268 58% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 38.6965401841 43.030603864 90% => OK
Chars per sentence: 73.5333333333 112.824112599 65% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.9333333333 22.9334400587 61% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.26666666667 5.23603664747 81% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 3.70975609756 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 1.13902439024 439% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 4.09268292683 220% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.280617317403 0.215688989381 130% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0902876542192 0.103423049105 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0752050873362 0.0843802449381 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.180511302294 0.15604864568 116% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0525899046716 0.0819641961636 64% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.4 13.2329268293 79% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 58.28 61.2550243902 95% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 10.3012195122 82% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.75 11.4140731707 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.12 8.06136585366 113% => OK
difficult_words: 64.0 40.7170731707 157% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 11.4329268293 57% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 7.2 10.9970731707 65% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.0658536585 90% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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