The diagrams below show the stages and equipment used in the cement-making process, and how cement is used to produce concrete for building purposes.
The first flow diagram illustrates the process of cement production, and the second diagram shows how the finished concrete is made.
It is clear that cement is made using two main raw materials, and that manufacturing process consists of five distinct stages. Meanwhile, it requires only one step to turn cement, along with three different ingredients, into concrete.
At the first stage in the production of cement, limestone and clay are passed through a crusher machine. Next, the resulting powders are mixed together, and then injected into a rotating heater. During this step, the mixed powder is heated and rotated simultaneously. The heated powder can then be ground to create cement. Finally, the finished product is packaged in large bags.
Cement is one of the four major materials which are utilised to produce concrete. Looking at the information in more details, the finished concrete production contains 15% of cement, 10% of water, 25% of sand, and 50% of small stones known as gravel. The whole of materials are blended together in a rotating machine called a concrete mixer.
- Nuclear energy is a better choice for meeting increasing demand, agree or disagree? 89
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- Computers are now the basis of the modern world They should therefore be introduced into classrooms and their programs used for direct teaching purposes Argue both sides and give your opinion Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples 79
- Each year the crime rate increases What are the causes of crime and what could be done to prevent this rise in criminal activity 92
- The line graph below shows the number of annual visits to Australia by overseas residents. The table below gives information on the country of origin where the visitors came from. 73
Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, first, if, look, second, then, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 7.0 157% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 6.8 88% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 5.0 5.60731707317 89% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 33.7804878049 74% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.97073170732 101% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 920.0 965.302439024 95% => OK
No of words: 178.0 196.424390244 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.16853932584 4.92477711251 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.65262427087 3.73543355544 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.68504064254 2.65546596893 101% => OK
Unique words: 112.0 106.607317073 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.629213483146 0.547539520022 115% => OK
syllable_count: 279.0 283.868780488 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 7.0 4.33902439024 161% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 4.0 0.482926829268 828% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 8.94146341463 123% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 22.4926829268 71% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 32.7065591016 43.030603864 76% => OK
Chars per sentence: 83.6363636364 112.824112599 74% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.1818181818 22.9334400587 71% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.09090909091 5.23603664747 78% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.09268292683 195% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.271872412081 0.215688989381 126% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0883524996347 0.103423049105 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0841658602207 0.0843802449381 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.167452577591 0.15604864568 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0792591332358 0.0819641961636 97% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.0 13.2329268293 83% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 61.2550243902 90% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.3012195122 92% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.41 11.4140731707 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.04 8.06136585366 112% => OK
difficult_words: 52.0 40.7170731707 128% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 11.4329268293 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.9970731707 76% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.0658536585 90% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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