The diagrams below show the stages in the erosion of a headland. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The graphs illustrate the process of a headland becoming eroded in a coastal area. The general overview here is that the process follows several natural steps without any affections of human being.
To specify, in the first stage, abraded rock was seen in the weak area at the bottom of the headland. In the next step, the abrasion has extended, which leads to the arch cave, such as Durdle Door or Dorset. Therefore, the structure of the headland becomes weaker and weaker, so that it is very easy for water to beat against the roof.
The result of the third stage is that a stack gets to be se...
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