The diagrams show the life cycle of an insect called the cicada

Essay topics:

The diagrams show the life cycle of an insect called the cicada.

The diagram illustrates the cicada’s life cycle.
Overall, there are three stages in the cicada’s life cycle, which transform form their eggs to the mature cicadas. These stages always revolve around trees over many years.
Looking at the diagram more closely, one can see that the cicada lay eggs inside of tree branches, these eggs hatches into the nymphs in 2 to 7 months later. Then, the nymph’s habitat is underground near tree roots, they build up a tunnel from 2 to 17 years during their maturation process. By the time the nymphs are about to reach at their maturity, they go back up to the trees where they shed their old skin. This process is called “moult”, and it takes a variety from 20 to 150 minutes, depend on each cicada individual. After this phase, they are condemned as a fully grown insect body, and can begin the new life cycle by their own reproductive capacity to produce consecutive cicada generations.

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Average: 9.2 (2 votes)

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 77, Rule ID: FROM_FORM[4]
Message: Did you mean 'from'?
Suggestion: from
...he cicada’s life cycle, which transform form their eggs to the mature cicadas. These...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, look, then

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.0 71% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 1.00243902439 200% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 6.8 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 15.0 5.60731707317 268% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 26.0 33.7804878049 77% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 780.0 965.302439024 81% => OK
No of words: 162.0 196.424390244 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.81481481481 4.92477711251 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.56762134501 3.73543355544 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.47705520107 2.65546596893 93% => OK
Unique words: 111.0 106.607317073 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.685185185185 0.547539520022 125% => OK
syllable_count: 234.0 283.868780488 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 1.53170731707 392% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.482926829268 414% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 22.4926829268 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.21286207 43.030603864 96% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.5 112.824112599 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.25 22.9334400587 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.75 5.23603664747 33% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.09268292683 122% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.205419675832 0.215688989381 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0999079543582 0.103423049105 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.102917611152 0.0843802449381 122% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.182729710683 0.15604864568 117% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0994230731317 0.0819641961636 121% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.4 13.2329268293 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 68.1 61.2550243902 111% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 10.3012195122 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.62 11.4140731707 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.23 8.06136585366 102% => OK
difficult_words: 37.0 40.7170731707 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 11.4329268293 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.9970731707 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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