The percentage of US music album sales by gerne in 2008 2009 2010

Essay topics:

The percentage of US music album sales by gerne in 2008,2009,2010

The pie charts illustrate the proportion of different categories of US music albums on sales from 2008 to 2010.
Overall, it is clear that there was a little deviation in the proportion of album sales by genre during 3 years. One can see that the most popular music types were Rock, followed by Alternative and R&B, whilst the least ones were Country and Jazz.
Looking at the charts more closely, it is evidence that the percentage of Rock album stands out as the most favorable genre among 5 genres figured in the charts over the period. In the 2 first consecutive years, the rate of people chose Rock album remained at 39 percent, before slightly increased by 1 percent in 2010. The similar trend was seen with R&B in 2008 and 2009, which made their percentage of album sales at 22 percent, but instead of uphill as Rock, they suffered the decline by 2 percent in 2010. Meanwhile, the proportion of Alternative album gained profits on markets dropped considerably from 23 percent in 2008 to 20 percent in the last 2 years of the period. Furthermore, there was an apparent speeding up in the sales of Country music album, particularly by 5 percent from 2008 to 2010, whilst Jazz music genre just remained their percentage of sales during 3-years period.

Votes
Average: 7.3 (1 vote)

Comments

Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, furthermore, if, look, while

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.0 100% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 6.8 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 9.0 5.60731707317 161% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 44.0 33.7804878049 130% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.97073170732 126% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1040.0 965.302439024 108% => OK
No of words: 220.0 196.424390244 112% => OK
Chars per words: 4.72727272727 4.92477711251 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.85128510684 3.73543355544 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.54433416902 2.65546596893 96% => OK
Unique words: 120.0 106.607317073 113% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.545454545455 0.547539520022 100% => OK
syllable_count: 304.2 283.868780488 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 1.53170731707 196% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 27.0 22.4926829268 120% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 35.0847188958 43.030603864 82% => OK
Chars per sentence: 130.0 112.824112599 115% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.5 22.9334400587 120% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.0 5.23603664747 95% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 3.70975609756 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.09268292683 49% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.370257145086 0.215688989381 172% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.171142774808 0.103423049105 165% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.125620231092 0.0843802449381 149% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.265501000818 0.15604864568 170% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.121786634822 0.0819641961636 149% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.6 13.2329268293 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 60.99 61.2550243902 100% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 10.3012195122 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.45 11.4140731707 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.06 8.06136585366 100% => OK
difficult_words: 43.0 40.7170731707 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.4329268293 96% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.9970731707 116% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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