In some countries an increasing number of people are suffering from health problems. As a result of eating much fast food. It is therefore necessary for and administration to impose a higher tax on this kind of food. To what extent agree or disagree with statement.
A millions of masses are victims from health hazards due to street food. Well it is important for authority to impliment more tax on these food. This essay disaccord with this statement to up extent. As junk food are tasty and save the time while, it is the cause of health diseases.
To commence with, the availability of fast food is worthwhile to save the time of every person in four corner of the world. For instance, in current days, most of the human’s has a hectic schedule so they do not have enough time to make food at their home of all the meals, so that they can buy from the market these food. Similarly, plenty of people change their tongue taste. So many people allure towards fast food because it is too delicious. To justify, junk food is lucrative for most of the people because it is easy to available in the place and save the time.
On the flip side, the continuously consumption of fast food is immoral for human health because it is too oily and it contains so many diseases such as obesity, heart problem and so on. However, the government impose higher taxes on fast food than most of the people do not buy it and eat it. As a result, people asserts after that it is the wastage of money because it leads various health hazards and too expensive.
To recapitalise, both view have own important but individual should consume less because it contains numerous caliories that is really harmful for every person.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible agreement error. Consider using: 'A million'
Suggestion: A million
A millions of masses are victims from health hazar...
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Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'A million' or simply 'millions'?
Suggestion: A million; Millions
A millions of masses are victims from health hazar...
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Line 1, column 134, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this food' or 'these foods'?
Suggestion: this food; these foods
... for authority to impliment more tax on these food. This essay disaccord with this stateme...
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Message: Possible agreement error. The noun 'corner' seems to be countable, so consider using: 'corners'.
Suggestion: corners
...o save the time of every person in four corner of the world. For instance, in current ...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...the meals, so that they can buy from the market these food. Similarly, plenty of ...
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Line 3, column 318, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this food' or 'these foods'?
Suggestion: this food; these foods
..., so that they can buy from the market these food. Similarly, plenty of people change the...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, really, similarly, so, well, while, for instance, such as, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1189.0 1615.20841683 74% => OK
No of words: 260.0 315.596192385 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.57307692308 5.12529762239 89% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.01553427287 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.42170596137 2.80592935109 86% => OK
Unique words: 139.0 176.041082164 79% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.534615384615 0.561755894193 95% => OK
syllable_count: 377.1 506.74238477 74% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.3863636041 49.4020404114 96% => OK
Chars per sentence: 91.4615384615 106.682146367 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.0 20.7667163134 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.76923076923 7.06120827912 96% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.288713169919 0.244688304435 118% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.110391060023 0.084324248473 131% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0512758598555 0.0667982634062 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.167847294956 0.151304729494 111% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0887185172583 0.056905535591 156% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.1 13.0946893788 77% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 50.2224549098 119% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.23 12.4159519038 74% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.79 8.58950901804 91% => OK
difficult_words: 52.0 78.4519038076 66% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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