In this day and age, it is argued that classmates are a more important influence than parents on a child's success in school. From my point of view, i totally agree with this statement thanks to classmates' motivations and mutual understanding.
To begin with, classmates offers us a competitive studying environment. When getting results at exam , students sometimes a little disappointed of themselves as they gained bad results. However, it is also a great motivation for them to study harder in order to get better rank next time and become as good as even better than their classmates who are their competitors. As a consequence, competitiveness in studying will make them to study more and get better results as well.
In addition, understanding each other will lead them to a steady and good relationship. Ass they are at the same age, they are likely to understand the other thoroughly. As a result, they will assist each other to solve problems that are sensitive secrets or something a little shy to talk to parents. Therefore, classmates play a vital role in supporting us in life.
In conclusion, it is undeniable that classmates have such a trong impact on us. Consequently, there is an advise that we should choose good friends so as to improve ourselves due to classmates' influence on our success in the future.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, consequently, however, if, so, therefore, well, as to, in addition, in conclusion, as a result, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.0 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 1.00243902439 399% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 6.0 6.8 88% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.15609756098 190% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 5.60731707317 482% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 31.0 33.7804878049 92% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 3.97073170732 176% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1109.0 965.302439024 115% => OK
No of words: 224.0 196.424390244 114% => OK
Chars per words: 4.95089285714 4.92477711251 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.86867284054 3.73543355544 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.05687971308 2.65546596893 115% => OK
Unique words: 135.0 106.607317073 127% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.602678571429 0.547539520022 110% => OK
syllable_count: 344.7 283.868780488 121% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 1.53170731707 392% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 0.0 4.33902439024 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.07073170732 280% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 3.36585365854 149% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 8.94146341463 134% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 22.4926829268 80% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 33.9358054109 43.030603864 79% => OK
Chars per sentence: 92.4166666667 112.824112599 82% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.6666666667 22.9334400587 81% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.58333333333 5.23603664747 183% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 1.69756097561 471% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 3.70975609756 216% => Less positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.13902439024 263% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.09268292683 24% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.228393406739 0.215688989381 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0827578821134 0.103423049105 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.122543971156 0.0843802449381 145% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.15590278197 0.15604864568 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.159818779907 0.0819641961636 195% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.2 13.2329268293 85% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 61.2550243902 101% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.3012195122 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.43 11.4140731707 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.91 8.06136585366 98% => OK
difficult_words: 48.0 40.7170731707 118% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 11.4329268293 101% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.9970731707 84% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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