Essay topics: The table shows the number of miles of passengers traveled on five types of transport in a European country in 1995 and 2005. It also shows a projection of the year 2015

Essay topics:

Essay topics: The table shows the number of miles of passengers traveled on five types of transport in a European country in 1995 and 2005. It also shows a projection of the year 2015

The table illustrates the information on the distance travelled by visitors in a European in different modes of transportation from 1995 to 2005 and predicted to 2015

Overall, it is clear that buses and rails were the most preferred transportation categories but the air gained popularity in the recent years.

One particularly interesting fact is that from a mere 2000 miles travel in airway in 1995, it is expected to soar ten times in 2015. Likewise, 38000 miles were travelled by using rails which rising to 48000 miles in 2005 and projected to grow by 12000 miles in 2015. Meanwhile, distance travelled by motorbikes and bicycles were less popular than that of others transports and slightly decline by 3000 miles and 1000 miles in 2005 respectively, followed by a modest increase in 2015.

By contrast, visiting by buses were witnessed a gradual decrease from 56000 miles in 1995 to 50000 miles by 2005 and then expected to fall to 48000 miles at the end of period. However, commuters in this country travelled total 103000 miles in 1995 and it is predicted to rise to 138000 miles in 2015.

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, likewise, so, then, while

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.0 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 6.8 132% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 7.0 5.60731707317 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 41.0 33.7804878049 121% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.97073170732 126% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 921.0 965.302439024 95% => OK
No of words: 188.0 196.424390244 96% => OK
Chars per words: 4.89893617021 4.92477711251 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.70287850203 3.73543355544 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.7745111193 2.65546596893 104% => OK
Unique words: 100.0 106.607317073 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.531914893617 0.547539520022 97% => OK
syllable_count: 262.8 283.868780488 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.33902439024 23% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 3.36585365854 30% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 8.94146341463 67% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 31.0 22.4926829268 138% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 66.2947961759 43.030603864 154% => OK
Chars per sentence: 153.5 112.824112599 136% => OK
Words per sentence: 31.3333333333 22.9334400587 137% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.16666666667 5.23603664747 137% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.29197289087 0.215688989381 135% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.161232803391 0.103423049105 156% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0337092389504 0.0843802449381 40% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.176315705678 0.15604864568 113% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0863428144678 0.0819641961636 105% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.3 13.2329268293 131% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.93 61.2550243902 93% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 10.3012195122 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.73 11.4140731707 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.04 8.06136585366 112% => OK
difficult_words: 46.0 40.7170731707 113% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 19.5 11.4329268293 171% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.4 10.9970731707 131% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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