Example 3: You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.
The table shows the amount of coal used by different sectors in the UK.
The given table presents information about how many million tons of coal used by the UK’s major energy consumers in the period between 1975 and 2000. Overall, the total coal consumption in the UK experienced a downward trend over the period, and the biggest coal consumer was Power stations, while Services had the smallest share in coal consumption.
Looking at the details, according to the user category, Power stations consumed the largest quality compared with the others approximately 60% of the total consumption at 77.2 million tons in 1975. In the following years, Power stations remained the largest coal consumer and reach a peak at 89.6 million tons in 1980. After that quality of coal used for power production decreased significantly to 47.1 million tons, nearly a half of the maximum quality of coal ever used.
There was a similarity in coal use in other sectors. In 1970, the record of coal consumption for UK economy was recorded at 121.2 million tons, over 25 years the coal consumption fell to just over a half compared to the first year in the statistic. In 1970 there was a year when quality of coal was consumed with the largest number in Domestic, Industry and Services at 20.2, 19.6 and 4.2 million tons, respectively. The quality of coal consumed in these economic sectors dramatically dropped to 2.6 million tons in Domestic, 3.2 million tons in Industry and 0.6 million tons in Services, almost 8 times, 6 times and 7 times less in 2000, respectively.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, look, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.0 71% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 6.8 103% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 2.0 5.60731707317 36% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 33.7804878049 130% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 3.97073170732 176% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1238.0 965.302439024 128% => OK
No of words: 251.0 196.424390244 128% => OK
Chars per words: 4.93227091633 4.92477711251 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.98032404683 3.73543355544 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.69638420297 2.65546596893 102% => OK
Unique words: 126.0 106.607317073 118% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.501992031873 0.547539520022 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 362.7 283.868780488 128% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 3.36585365854 178% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 27.0 22.4926829268 120% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 50.6354679773 43.030603864 118% => OK
Chars per sentence: 137.555555556 112.824112599 122% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.8888888889 22.9334400587 122% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.44444444444 5.23603664747 47% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 3.70975609756 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.09268292683 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.129060847989 0.215688989381 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0704047785408 0.103423049105 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0436015531789 0.0843802449381 52% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.103437932105 0.15604864568 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0463012375389 0.0819641961636 56% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.7 13.2329268293 119% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 60.99 61.2550243902 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 10.3012195122 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.61 11.4140731707 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.31 8.06136585366 103% => OK
difficult_words: 53.0 40.7170731707 130% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 11.4329268293 118% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.9970731707 116% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.0658536585 108% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.