The table below presents the number of children ever born to women aged 40 44 years in Australia for each year the information was collected since 1981 Number of children ever born Women aged 40 44 years year None One child Two children Three children Fou

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The table below presents the number of children ever born to women aged 40-44 years in Australia for each year the information was collected since 1981.
Number of children ever born, Women aged 40–44 years

year None % One child% Two children% Three children% Four or more children%
2006 15.9 13.2 38.3 21.5 11.0
1996 12.8 11.3 38.2 24.6 13.1
1986 9.7 8.7 35.6 27.0 18.9
1981 8.5 7.6 29.0 27.4 27.6
Source: ABS Births Australia 2001, 2006 (3301.0)

The table illustrates information about how many children in percentage were born to women aged 40-45 years old in the period between 1981 and 2006 years in Australia.
Generally, it can be clearly seen that percentage of women aged 40-44, having born none to two children saw an upward trend, however, the percentage of women this age, who born more two children experienced a downward trend over the period.
Look at the details, on the increase tendency, in 1981 proportion of mid-age women (age 40-44), who born two children per year was the most number at 29.0 percent, almost one third of women this age, making it significantly higher than proportion of the women having born none, one child at 8.5 % and 7.6 % respectively. Interestingly, over the time, the proportion of the two children women stable increased and remaining the largest proportion. In the period percentage of the two children women was a gradual rise, whereas rates of the women having none and one child mostly doubled in 2006 with 15.9 % and 13.2%.
By contrast, on the downward trends, regarding women with four and more children, it experienced a dramatic fall from the second biggest proportion in 1981 to the lowest in 2006 at 11.0%. Similarly, the third children women have the same decrease trend, by 2006 the figure went down to 21.5%.

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, look, regarding, second, similarly, third, whereas

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.0 57% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 6.8 88% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 6.0 5.60731707317 107% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 33.7804878049 110% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.97073170732 151% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1099.0 965.302439024 114% => OK
No of words: 223.0 196.424390244 114% => OK
Chars per words: 4.92825112108 4.92477711251 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.86434787811 3.73543355544 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.63927946012 2.65546596893 99% => OK
Unique words: 117.0 106.607317073 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.52466367713 0.547539520022 96% => OK
syllable_count: 315.0 283.868780488 111% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 3.36585365854 238% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 8.94146341463 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 31.0 22.4926829268 138% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 67.0041119664 43.030603864 156% => OK
Chars per sentence: 157.0 112.824112599 139% => OK
Words per sentence: 31.8571428571 22.9334400587 139% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.0 5.23603664747 172% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.475170369007 0.215688989381 220% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.234086097541 0.103423049105 226% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.109241566592 0.0843802449381 129% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.308265284618 0.15604864568 198% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.095330949254 0.0819641961636 116% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.7 13.2329268293 134% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.93 61.2550243902 93% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 10.3012195122 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.91 11.4140731707 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.79 8.06136585366 97% => OK
difficult_words: 37.0 40.7170731707 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 18.0 11.4329268293 157% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.4 10.9970731707 131% => OK
text_standard: 18.0 11.0658536585 163% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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