The first chart below gives information about the money spent by
British parents on their children’s sports between 2008 and 2014.
The second chart shows the number of children who participated in
three sports in Britain over the same time period.
The graphs present the data of children sport spending trend monthly in the UK from 2008 to 2014, and the number of children football, athletics, and swimming participants during the same period.
In general, there was an upward trend in the number of sport participants over time and the money spending pattern appeared to reflect this trend.
Football would appear to be the most attractive sport for children with the number of players always ranked highest among three sports. However, there was only a slight increase in the number of football participants, which rose from 7.5 million in 2014 to a high of approximately 9 million in 2014. Swimming seemed to keep its attraction quite steady with children, stably rose from under 2.5 million participants in 2008 to roughly 3 million by 2014. By contrast, the number of children registering for athletics had a remarkable double raise, turning it from the least favorite one before 2010 to the second popular sport following football after 2011. The participant number of athletics even reached a peak of 5 million in 2012 before slightly tailing off.
Regarding the sport spending trend, a steadily continuous increase has been shown during the recorded period, rising from only 20 pounds per month for a child in 2008 to an over of 30 pounds on average at the period end
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, regarding, second, in general
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.0 57% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 6.8 44% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 0.0 3.15609756098 0% => OK
Pronoun: 3.0 5.60731707317 54% => OK
Preposition: 49.0 33.7804878049 145% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1101.0 965.302439024 114% => OK
No of words: 222.0 196.424390244 113% => OK
Chars per words: 4.95945945946 4.92477711251 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.8600083453 3.73543355544 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.64280473158 2.65546596893 100% => OK
Unique words: 126.0 106.607317073 118% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.567567567568 0.547539520022 104% => OK
syllable_count: 308.7 283.868780488 109% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.482926829268 414% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 27.0 22.4926829268 120% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 38.4634566829 43.030603864 89% => OK
Chars per sentence: 137.625 112.824112599 122% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.75 22.9334400587 121% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.75 5.23603664747 91% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 3.70975609756 216% => Less positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.09268292683 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.253486769419 0.215688989381 118% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.117485625956 0.103423049105 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0613681584391 0.0843802449381 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.167216046092 0.15604864568 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.059708919193 0.0819641961636 73% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.8 13.2329268293 119% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 60.99 61.2550243902 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 10.3012195122 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.78 11.4140731707 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.89 8.06136585366 98% => OK
difficult_words: 41.0 40.7170731707 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 11.4329268293 118% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.9970731707 116% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.0658536585 108% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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