The first chart below shows how energy is used in an average asutralian household. The second chart shows the greenhouse gas emission which result from this energy use.
summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main feature, and make comparisons where relevant.
The first pie-chart below demonstrates about the average energy consumption by Australian household whereas the second chart depicts the greenhouse gas emission resulted due to use of energy. Both the picture tries to correlate between energy use and energy responsible for greenhouse gas emission.
The first pie-chart, which is about the energy consumption, illustrates which energy is consumed highest and which in lowest. Here, energy consumption is greatest in heating (42%) followed by water heating (30%). The least consumption is in cooling which only accounts 2%. Utilization of energy in other sector such as other appliance, refrigerator and light holds 15%, 7% and 4% respectively.
In the same way, second Pie-chart presents the data which clearly shows that the water heating shares the greatest proportion of greenhouse gas emission among other. Before discussing about the cooling which has minimal effect in producing greenhouse gases, other appliance took its stands for the second position. Similarly, refrigeration, heating and lighting are the other major contributor having 15%, 14% and 8% contribution to greenhouse gas emission respectively.
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- The first chart below shows how energy is used in an average asutralian household. The second chart shows the greenhouse gas emission which result from this energy use. summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main feature, and make compar 84
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 9, column 472, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, second, similarly, whereas, such as, in the same way
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.0 71% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 6.8 88% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 3.15609756098 222% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 2.0 5.60731707317 36% => OK
Preposition: 21.0 33.7804878049 62% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 3.97073170732 252% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1010.0 965.302439024 105% => OK
No of words: 174.0 196.424390244 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.80459770115 4.92477711251 118% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.63192868298 3.73543355544 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.95236771012 2.65546596893 111% => OK
Unique words: 101.0 106.607317073 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.580459770115 0.547539520022 106% => OK
syllable_count: 294.3 283.868780488 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.45097560976 117% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 22.4926829268 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 39.3006769646 43.030603864 91% => OK
Chars per sentence: 112.222222222 112.824112599 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.3333333333 22.9334400587 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.11111111111 5.23603664747 136% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 3.70975609756 189% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.09268292683 49% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.350957304984 0.215688989381 163% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.142213575197 0.103423049105 138% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.115273222585 0.0843802449381 137% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.251670728626 0.15604864568 161% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.11233314137 0.0819641961636 137% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.6 13.2329268293 118% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 61.2550243902 71% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 10.3012195122 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 16.36 11.4140731707 143% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.3 8.06136585366 115% => OK
difficult_words: 52.0 40.7170731707 128% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 11.4329268293 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.9970731707 87% => OK
text_standard: 16.0 11.0658536585 145% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.