The first chart below shows how energy is used in an average Australian household. The second chart shows the greenhouse gas emissions which result from this energy use
The pie charts below illustrate an Australian household use energy and the greenhouse gas emissions resulting from this energy use in average.
Overall, it is clearly from the first chart that the figure for heating is the highest among the categories, while the proportion of water heating is the highest on the second chart. And the figure for cooling and lighting is the lowest on the two pie charts.
According to the data on the first chart, energy is used for heating the most in an average Australian household, account for 42 percent, and followed by water heating, with 30 percent. Australian household spend less energy on other appliances, with 15 percent. And the percentage of refrigeration, lighting and cooling is the lowest, with 7 percent, 4 percent and 2 percent respectively.
Looking at the second chart, it can be seen that the highest proportion among the categories is water heating, account for 32 percent, which is 2 percent higher than that on the first chart. The figure for other appliances is the second highest, with 28 percent. The percentage of greenhouse gas emissions from heating and refrigeration are almost the same, with 15 percent and 14 percent respectively. The greenhouse gas emissions from cooling and lighting in an average Australian household is the least, account for 3 percent and 8 percent respectively.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, look, second, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 7.0 171% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 6.8 162% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 6.0 5.60731707317 107% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 33.7804878049 77% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.97073170732 101% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1135.0 965.302439024 118% => OK
No of words: 223.0 196.424390244 114% => OK
Chars per words: 5.08968609865 4.92477711251 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.86434787811 3.73543355544 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.87041055804 2.65546596893 108% => OK
Unique words: 95.0 106.607317073 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.42600896861 0.547539520022 78% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 331.2 283.868780488 117% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.482926829268 621% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 3.36585365854 178% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 8.94146341463 112% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 22.4926829268 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.1153034672 43.030603864 103% => OK
Chars per sentence: 113.5 112.824112599 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.3 22.9334400587 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.6 5.23603664747 50% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 1.69756097561 177% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 3.70975609756 162% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.13902439024 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.09268292683 49% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.335611574359 0.215688989381 156% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.163440821041 0.103423049105 158% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.175523363216 0.0843802449381 208% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.281760343222 0.15604864568 181% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.20598976385 0.0819641961636 251% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.7 13.2329268293 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 61.2550243902 94% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.3012195122 104% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.54 11.4140731707 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.35 8.06136585366 91% => OK
difficult_words: 37.0 40.7170731707 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 11.4329268293 114% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.9970731707 98% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 11.0658536585 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.