To succeed in business, one needs to learn and know math. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
In this day and age, many people think about how to succeed in business. It is believed that math plays an important role. In my opinion, i partly agree with this statement.
On the one hand, math plays a vital role in our life. People solve a simple calculation or a complex argument by doing maths. Even a small mistake may lead to the wrong answer. In business, people also have to calculate and a small mistake can lead to the big deal, so calculating is vital. Moreover, math is used in some different types of occupation, such as accounting and banking. As a result, math is esential in managing a business.
On the other hand, a successful business man need to have a business’s vision and leadership skill in addition to math. Firstly, leadership skill may help a business man to control the company and the employees. For instance, if the business man does not have this skill, the employees do not follow their leader, drama could happen, even they may destroy the company. Secondly, people need to have the business’s vision, they have to know about the markets, what do people need. Therefore, a plethora of intelligent people have to let someone who have business’s vision be the leader.
In conclusion, although math is important for people to be a successful business man, they do not have to do it well.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, if, may, moreover, second, secondly, so, therefore, well, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, such as, as a result, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 13.0 24.0651302605 54% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 41.998997996 67% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1100.0 1615.20841683 68% => OK
No of words: 233.0 315.596192385 74% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.72103004292 5.12529762239 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.90696013833 4.20363070211 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.70022918205 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 129.0 176.041082164 73% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.55364806867 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 339.3 506.74238477 67% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 32.191510268 49.4020404114 65% => OK
Chars per sentence: 73.3333333333 106.682146367 69% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.5333333333 20.7667163134 75% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.7333333333 7.06120827912 166% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.230599875696 0.244688304435 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0764798724671 0.084324248473 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0616663852075 0.0667982634062 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.131308890417 0.151304729494 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0417991874701 0.056905535591 73% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.6 13.0946893788 66% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 64.71 50.2224549098 129% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 11.3001002004 71% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.8 12.4159519038 79% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.7 8.58950901804 90% => OK
difficult_words: 49.0 78.4519038076 62% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 9.78957915832 56% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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