Some experts believe that it is better for children to begin learning a foreign language at primary schools rather than secondary school. Do the advantages of this outweigh the disadvantages?
In this day and age, some experts think that children should be taught a foreign language at primary school. While others think that they should begin learning at secondary school. In my opinion, I believe that learning a new language has more benefits than drawbacks.
On the one hand, there are also some demerits. The main disadvantages of learning a new language is that children can be under pressure. They have more subjects at school, such as math, literature,... which they have to pay attention to. Moreover, they need to have free time to play since they are children. If children have to concentrate on many subjects, they can be stressed.
On the other hand, learning a foreign language has a plethora of merits. Firstly, young children have good memories, so it is good for them to learn the pronunciation and try to imitate it. As a result, they may learn a new language very fast. In additon, children may not afraid of making mistakes while practicing since most of them are confident. This can helps them to learn faster. Secondly, learning a new language is helpful for children’s career in the future. In these days, young people prefer to work for a foreign country, and there are more opportunities for them in other country. For instance, if you want to work for a foreign company, you have to know their language. Many people have difficulties in language barriers. For these reasons, children should be taught a new language at primary school.
In conclusion, although there are also disadvantages, I believe that learning a foreign language at primary school has more benefits than drawbacks.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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...ects at school, such as math, literature,... which they have to pay attention to. ...
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Message: The verb 'can' requires the base form of the verb: 'help'
Suggestion: help
...ce most of them are confident. This can helps them to learn faster. Secondly, learnin...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, if, may, moreover, second, secondly, so, while, for instance, in conclusion, such as, as a result, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 10.4138276553 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1351.0 1615.20841683 84% => OK
No of words: 274.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.93065693431 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0685311056 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.75014227638 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 131.0 176.041082164 74% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.478102189781 0.561755894193 85% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 406.8 506.74238477 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 16.0721442886 124% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 20.2975951904 64% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 28.9746009463 49.4020404114 59% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 67.55 106.682146367 63% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.7 20.7667163134 66% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.65 7.06120827912 108% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.392998547857 0.244688304435 161% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.126239334047 0.084324248473 150% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0990266627401 0.0667982634062 148% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.284526252181 0.151304729494 188% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.112465166601 0.056905535591 198% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.6 13.0946893788 66% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 66.74 50.2224549098 133% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 11.3001002004 64% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.72 12.4159519038 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.16 8.58950901804 83% => OK
difficult_words: 50.0 78.4519038076 64% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 9.78957915832 56% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 7.2 10.1190380762 71% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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