The two pie charts illustrate the consumption of energy percentwise in a common Australian household with a further classification of greenhouse gas emissions from each category.
Overall, the highest amount of energy in an average Australian household is consumed in heating, while cooling takes up the least amount of energy. Furthermore, water heating emits a significant amount of greenhouse gas and in proportion to energy usage, cooling emits the least amount of greenhouse gas
Although, heating accounts for almost half of the energy used in an Australian household, the greenhouse gas emitted through heating is quite less i.e only 15% of the greenhouse gas emitted from a household comes from heating.
Water heating which takes up 30% of the energy consumed by an Australian household also emits a similar proportion of greenhouse gas which is 32%. Refrigeration consumes only 7% of total energy but emits almost a double quantity of greenhouse gas. Cooling and lighting accounts for 2% and 4% of the energy consumption by a household emits 3% and 8% greenhouse gas respectively which is also more than the energy it consumes. Lastly, any other appliances used consumes only 14% of the total energy used, but this category accounts for more than a quarter of the total greenhouse gas emitted.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, if, lastly, so, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.0 57% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 6.8 88% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 3.0 5.60731707317 54% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 33.7804878049 89% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.97073170732 151% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1096.0 965.302439024 114% => OK
No of words: 211.0 196.424390244 107% => OK
Chars per words: 5.19431279621 4.92477711251 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.81127787577 3.73543355544 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.94273489908 2.65546596893 111% => OK
Unique words: 96.0 106.607317073 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.454976303318 0.547539520022 83% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 343.8 283.868780488 121% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 3.36585365854 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 8.94146341463 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 30.0 22.4926829268 133% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 84.4511693229 43.030603864 196% => OK
Chars per sentence: 156.571428571 112.824112599 139% => OK
Words per sentence: 30.1428571429 22.9334400587 131% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.42857142857 5.23603664747 123% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 3.70975609756 189% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.09268292683 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.363250884945 0.215688989381 168% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.193056440487 0.103423049105 187% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0503785014361 0.0843802449381 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.242469141729 0.15604864568 155% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0430702152628 0.0819641961636 53% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.1 13.2329268293 137% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.03 61.2550243902 67% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.0 10.3012195122 146% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.41 11.4140731707 117% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.57 8.06136585366 106% => OK
difficult_words: 46.0 40.7170731707 113% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 18.0 11.4329268293 157% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.0 10.9970731707 127% => OK
text_standard: 18.0 11.0658536585 163% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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