The first chart below shows how energy is used in an average Australian household. The second chart shows the greenhouse gas emissions which result from this energy use.
Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
These two pie charts depict percentage of energy consumptions and greenhouse gas emission on household in Australia respectively.
According to the first figure, heating is the vast majority of energy demand. However, water heating has the second most ratio of power consumption, which produces the most greenhouse gas in household applications. On the other hand, heating and refrigeration have similar ratio in production on greenhouse gas.
As can be seen from the first chart, more than 40% of power is consumed by heating, which is three twice time as water heating, thirty percentages. The other minor applications account for approximately 30%.
In terms of greenhouse gas emission, around 30% of greenhouse gas is emitted by water heating which is close to the ratio of power consumption. Refrigerator exhausts 15% of gases, which is similar to heating application.
In conclusion, despite heating accounts for four of tenth on power consumptions, it emits just 15% of greenhouse gas. Refrigerator not only takes more energy but also exhaust the most greenhouse effect.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, second, so, in conclusion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.0 100% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 6.8 44% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 2.0 5.60731707317 36% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 33.7804878049 80% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.97073170732 126% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 915.0 965.302439024 95% => OK
No of words: 169.0 196.424390244 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.41420118343 4.92477711251 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.60555127546 3.73543355544 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.09102367606 2.65546596893 116% => OK
Unique words: 97.0 106.607317073 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.573964497041 0.547539520022 105% => OK
syllable_count: 275.4 283.868780488 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.33902439024 23% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 3.36585365854 178% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 8.94146341463 112% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 22.4926829268 71% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 30.2198610189 43.030603864 70% => OK
Chars per sentence: 91.5 112.824112599 81% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.9 22.9334400587 74% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.1 5.23603664747 136% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 3.83414634146 130% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.13902439024 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.09268292683 122% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.197476245977 0.215688989381 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0830071592659 0.103423049105 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0548065510878 0.0843802449381 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.122952175366 0.15604864568 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.04837779852 0.0819641961636 59% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.5 13.2329268293 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 61.2550243902 90% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.3012195122 92% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.8 11.4140731707 121% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.45 8.06136585366 105% => OK
difficult_words: 43.0 40.7170731707 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 11.4329268293 74% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.9970731707 76% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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