the flow chart below show the procedure to get the driving license in US

The diagram illustrates the process of obtaining a driving license in the US.
Overall, there are three tests that participants have to pass in order to get a driving license, starting with the eyesight test and ending with the practical test.
Firstly, it is necessary for participants to go to the driving license center and fill out the form to register to have a driving license. After that, an eyesight test is required. People who fail this test will not be given the license, while those passing have to pay fees and take the written test.
Subsequently, participants failing this test have two chances to retake it, with the former being free and the latter requiring fees. If they ace the written test, they have to take the road driver test and have a driving license. But if not, they will go home without this license. By contrast, people acing the written test at the first time will go into the practical test immediately. Once they have passed this test, they will get a driving license. However, if they fail, they are required to take this test again with fees. The license would not be given until they aced the road driving test.

Votes
Average: 7.3 (1 vote)

Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, however, if, while

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.0 100% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 1.00243902439 499% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 6.0 6.8 88% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 5.60731707317 339% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 24.0 33.7804878049 71% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.97073170732 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 951.0 965.302439024 99% => OK
No of words: 203.0 196.424390244 103% => OK
Chars per words: 4.68472906404 4.92477711251 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.77462671648 3.73543355544 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.35146223682 2.65546596893 89% => OK
Unique words: 102.0 106.607317073 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.502463054187 0.547539520022 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 288.0 283.868780488 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 1.53170731707 326% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 1.07073170732 374% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 8.94146341463 134% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 22.4926829268 71% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 36.4337297935 43.030603864 85% => OK
Chars per sentence: 79.25 112.824112599 70% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.9166666667 22.9334400587 74% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.25 5.23603664747 62% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 3.70975609756 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.13902439024 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 4.09268292683 220% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.102845723825 0.215688989381 48% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0592281830857 0.103423049105 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0735369708223 0.0843802449381 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.110484589931 0.15604864568 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0726779545962 0.0819641961636 89% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.1 13.2329268293 69% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 72.16 61.2550243902 118% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 10.3012195122 70% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.57 11.4140731707 84% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.07 8.06136585366 88% => OK
difficult_words: 34.0 40.7170731707 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 11.4329268293 74% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.9970731707 76% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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