The charts illustrate the percentages of two kinds of TV programmes that male and female watch. Moreover, it is also indicate four groups of age in Australia whose watching these shows.
Overall, it is noticeable that there are more women watch reality shows than men in the period recorded; while the opposite is true for game shows. What's more, people aged 45+ is account for the largest rate in both genres of shows.
When it comes to reality shows, the proportion of male watching it is about 35%, while the figure for female is nearly 70%. Particularly, there are approximately 70% people in group 45+ is in favour of this kind of TV programme. This was followed by the figures for 35-44 and 25-34, with the former standing at 65% and the latter amounting to around 60%. The percentage of people in group of people aged 16-24 watching this show is merely over 50%.
For game shows, the rates of men and women watching it are about 60% and around 58% respectively. There is a significant difference in the proportion of 4 mentioned groups of age, ranging from the highest of 70% in 45+ to the lowest of nearly 40% in 25-34.
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Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 118, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'indicated'.
Suggestion: indicated
... and female watch. Moreover, it is also indicate four groups of age in Australia whose w...
^^^^^^^^
Line 2, column 148, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: What's
...le the opposite is true for game shows. Whats more, people aged 45+ is account for th...
^^^^^
Line 4, column 56, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'is'?
Suggestion: is
... the rates of men and women watching it are about 60% and around 58% respectively. ...
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, moreover, so, while, kind of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 7.0 186% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 6.8 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 11.0 5.60731707317 196% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 36.0 33.7804878049 107% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.97073170732 76% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 929.0 965.302439024 96% => OK
No of words: 202.0 196.424390244 103% => OK
Chars per words: 4.59900990099 4.92477711251 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.76996954942 3.73543355544 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.50695044023 2.65546596893 94% => OK
Unique words: 111.0 106.607317073 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.549504950495 0.547539520022 100% => OK
syllable_count: 276.3 283.868780488 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 1.53170731707 196% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.07073170732 280% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 3.36585365854 30% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 8.94146341463 112% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 22.4926829268 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 24.2497422667 43.030603864 56% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 92.9 112.824112599 82% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.2 22.9334400587 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.8 5.23603664747 73% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 1.69756097561 177% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.09268292683 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.303158967374 0.215688989381 141% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.120243304308 0.103423049105 116% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0733343007979 0.0843802449381 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.19845505937 0.15604864568 127% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.099961892076 0.0819641961636 122% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.3 13.2329268293 78% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 68.1 61.2550243902 111% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 10.3012195122 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.4 11.4140731707 82% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.52 8.06136585366 93% => OK
difficult_words: 37.0 40.7170731707 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 11.4329268293 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.9970731707 91% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.0658536585 72% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 118, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'indicated'.
Suggestion: indicated
... and female watch. Moreover, it is also indicate four groups of age in Australia whose w...
^^^^^^^^
Line 2, column 148, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: What's
...le the opposite is true for game shows. Whats more, people aged 45+ is account for th...
^^^^^
Line 4, column 56, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'is'?
Suggestion: is
... the rates of men and women watching it are about 60% and around 58% respectively. ...
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, moreover, so, while, kind of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 7.0 186% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 6.8 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 11.0 5.60731707317 196% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 36.0 33.7804878049 107% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.97073170732 76% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 929.0 965.302439024 96% => OK
No of words: 202.0 196.424390244 103% => OK
Chars per words: 4.59900990099 4.92477711251 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.76996954942 3.73543355544 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.50695044023 2.65546596893 94% => OK
Unique words: 111.0 106.607317073 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.549504950495 0.547539520022 100% => OK
syllable_count: 276.3 283.868780488 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 1.53170731707 196% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.07073170732 280% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 3.36585365854 30% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 8.94146341463 112% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 22.4926829268 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 24.2497422667 43.030603864 56% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 92.9 112.824112599 82% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.2 22.9334400587 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.8 5.23603664747 73% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 1.69756097561 177% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.09268292683 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.303158967374 0.215688989381 141% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.120243304308 0.103423049105 116% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0733343007979 0.0843802449381 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.19845505937 0.15604864568 127% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.099961892076 0.0819641961636 122% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.3 13.2329268293 78% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 68.1 61.2550243902 111% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 10.3012195122 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.4 11.4140731707 82% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.52 8.06136585366 93% => OK
difficult_words: 37.0 40.7170731707 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 11.4329268293 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.9970731707 91% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.0658536585 72% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.