The diagram illustrates the process of recycling glass bottle through three stages.
Overall, there are three main steps in this process, beginning with collecting wasted glass bottles, and ending with making new bottles to be used in various products.
The first stage is that unwanted glass bottles are collected and stored at collection point. Then a large number of waste bottles are transferred to glass factory to be recycled. The second stage starts at removing impurities under high pressure water and sorting them into different colours. Next, the tiny pieces crushed from glass bottles are melted in furnace whose temperature is from 600 to 800oC. Following that, recycled liquid glass is moulded to become new bottles with desire shapes. New liquid glass is also experienced similar final step before being a new bottles.
The final stage is to use new glass bottles for proper human purposes, such as decorating or packaging water, food, or any liquid. Glass bottles are then sent to supermarket to be consumed again.
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- The flow chart below shows the three stages of glass bottle recycling 93
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 98, Rule ID: LARGE_NUMBER_OF[1]
Message: Specify a number, remove phrase, or simply use 'many' or 'numerous'
Suggestion: many; numerous
...ed and stored at collection point. Then a large number of waste bottles are transferred to glass ...
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Line 3, column 571, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[2]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'bottle'?
Suggestion: bottle
...d similar final step before being a new bottles. The final stage is to use new glass b...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, if, second, so, then, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 7.0 200% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 6.8 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 4.0 5.60731707317 71% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 33.7804878049 71% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 868.0 965.302439024 90% => OK
No of words: 167.0 196.424390244 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.19760479042 4.92477711251 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.59483629437 3.73543355544 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.43140318895 2.65546596893 92% => OK
Unique words: 110.0 106.607317073 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.658682634731 0.547539520022 120% => OK
syllable_count: 260.1 283.868780488 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.33902439024 115% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.482926829268 414% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 3.36585365854 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 8.94146341463 112% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 22.4926829268 71% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 28.0928816607 43.030603864 65% => OK
Chars per sentence: 86.8 112.824112599 77% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.7 22.9334400587 73% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.2 5.23603664747 80% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 3.70975609756 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 1.13902439024 439% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.09268292683 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.261614369991 0.215688989381 121% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.11798944389 0.103423049105 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0465440325297 0.0843802449381 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.177493593455 0.15604864568 114% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0341604316264 0.0819641961636 42% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.4 13.2329268293 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 61.2550243902 90% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.3012195122 92% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.58 11.4140731707 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.87 8.06136585366 110% => OK
difficult_words: 47.0 40.7170731707 115% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 11.4329268293 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.9970731707 76% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.0658536585 90% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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