Nowadays the way many people interact with each other has changed because of technology. In what ways has technology affected the type of relationship people make? Has this become a positive or negative development?
Give reason for your answer and include any relevent examples from your own knowledge or experience?
Technology causes different interaction manner between people in the world today. That is positive development of technology which all the ways have an impact on people’s relationship.
There are a long list that people can take advantage of technology. Firstly, that is high – quality technology product such as computer, mobile phone, tablet, etc. With the help from these, they can conduct their job in a comfortable and faster way. Secondly, The increasing of the internet services makes human in a long distance can easily communicate with each other. Couples can see face to face through a camera or chat everyday, electronic-mail services can help a busy mom works from home and fulfills any tasks perfectly even though they are not in the office or we can take a taxi through an application on mobile phone.
That is the reason we can say technology developes positively nowadays and plays an important role in our lives. The number of customer chosing technological products and services have risen every days and the companies providing these have increased as well. We are living in a flat life that everyone receives the information all over the world; we are living in a fastest life that computer does the complex task within a minute. All the fields from education to entertaiment need technology, all people from student to the old use technology. Technology has changed our lives dramatically.
Technology brings the positive impacts that helps our lives more convenient and simple. That why technology development is very important nowadays.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, if, second, secondly, so, well, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 41.998997996 64% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1318.0 1615.20841683 82% => OK
No of words: 254.0 315.596192385 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.18897637795 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.99216450694 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.89698511992 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 154.0 176.041082164 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.606299212598 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 423.9 506.74238477 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 52.0043659863 49.4020404114 105% => OK
Chars per sentence: 94.1428571429 106.682146367 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.1428571429 20.7667163134 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.92857142857 7.06120827912 56% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.212508579505 0.244688304435 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0838530148393 0.084324248473 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.063706403487 0.0667982634062 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.143123191851 0.151304729494 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0729771209365 0.056905535591 128% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.1 13.0946893788 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 44.75 50.2224549098 89% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.53 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.82 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 78.4519038076 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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