The following bar chat shows the hours of leisure time that females and male spent
The bar chart compares the free time which has been spent by females and males of five categories of employment series from 1998 to 1999
Overall, It can be seen that people who are unemployed and retired spend the highest hours of leisure time; However, the figure for employed part time and the category of housewife that are shown in the graph were only woman.
In terms of women all the five categories enjoy their time . the group of unemployed spent nearly 75 hours ,this amount of hours exactly same as those retired category. even though ,leisure were spent by all kind of female could not outrun the males in 3 out of five categories who work full time , managed to spend around 40 hours for fun activities
On the other hand the figure for unemployed and retired stood at 80 hours which are the most spending hours among males and female other than that around 45 hours were spent by full time workers.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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...s of employment series from 1998 to 1999 Overall, It can be seen that people who ...
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Suggestion: part-time
... time; However, the figure for employed part time and the category of housewife that are ...
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...all the five categories enjoy their time . the group of unemployed spent nearly 75...
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... the five categories enjoy their time . the group of unemployed spent nearly 75 hou...
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Suggestion: ,
...roup of unemployed spent nearly 75 hours ,this amount of hours exactly same as tho...
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Suggestion: Even
...exactly same as those retired category. even though ,leisure were spent by all kind ...
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Suggestion: ,
...e as those retired category. even though ,leisure were spent by all kind of female...
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Line 5, column 289, Rule ID: EN_COMPOUNDS
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Suggestion: fulltime
...es in 3 out of five categories who work full time , managed to spend around 40 hours for ...
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Line 5, column 298, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
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Suggestion: ,
...ut of five categories who work full time , managed to spend around 40 hours for fu...
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...spend around 40 hours for fun activities On the other hand the figure for unemplo...
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Message: This word is normally spelled as one.
Suggestion: fulltime
...than that around 45 hours were spent by full time workers.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, kind of, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.0 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 1.00243902439 200% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 6.8 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 3.15609756098 222% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 7.0 5.60731707317 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 23.0 33.7804878049 68% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 756.0 965.302439024 78% => OK
No of words: 164.0 196.424390244 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.60975609756 4.92477711251 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.57858190836 3.73543355544 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.12479025631 2.65546596893 80% => OK
Unique words: 98.0 106.607317073 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.59756097561 0.547539520022 109% => OK
syllable_count: 229.5 283.868780488 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 4.0 8.94146341463 45% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 41.0 22.4926829268 182% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 146.045369663 43.030603864 339% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 189.0 112.824112599 168% => OK
Words per sentence: 41.0 22.9334400587 179% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.75 5.23603664747 186% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 11.0 1.69756097561 648% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.09268292683 24% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.347874951148 0.215688989381 161% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.190132304649 0.103423049105 184% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0962545624987 0.0843802449381 114% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.220386222934 0.15604864568 141% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0477338602994 0.0819641961636 58% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 20.8 13.2329268293 157% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.78 61.2550243902 76% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 16.9 10.3012195122 164% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.35 11.4140731707 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.98 8.06136585366 99% => OK
difficult_words: 24.0 40.7170731707 59% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 11.4329268293 118% => OK
gunning_fog: 18.4 10.9970731707 167% => OK
text_standard: 21.0 11.0658536585 190% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.