You recently attended the meeting at a hotel when you returned home. You found you had left something important papers at the hotel.
Write a letter to the manager of the hotel .in your letter
Say where you think you left the papers
Explain why they are so important
Tell the manager what you want him
I am writing to ask for the information about the documents that I had forgotten to take back at the star hotel
I assume that my papers should have been left in the meeting room, which is 101,on the deck was being used during conversation. However, I also was walking with those documents into the office room. So, sometimes it might be 8n that place too.
Firstly, green coloured file is my assignment
Which has to be submitted next week to my college. If I don't submit, I will be severely punished because the deadline has finished two days ago. Secondly, i kept my friend's marriage certificate with in the assignment as I was about to hand it in to her.
I therefore kindly request to check those papers and could you please contact me on my phone number which is 0789077724 or I would be grateful if you could send the above _ mentioned papers to my email .
Thank you in advance for the assistance
Sincerely,
Thadshayini baskaran
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 137, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...being used during conversation. However, I also was walking with those documents ...
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Line 3, column 9, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...it might be 8n that place too. Firstly, green coloured file is my assignment W...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...y, green coloured file is my assignment Which has to be submitted next week to m...
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Line 4, column 57, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
...submitted next week to my college. If I dont submit, I will be severely punished bec...
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Line 4, column 155, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ine has finished two days ago. Secondly, i kept my friends marriage certificate w...
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Line 4, column 157, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...e has finished two days ago. Secondly, i kept my friends marriage certificate wi...
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Line 5, column 202, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...the above _ mentioned papers to my email . Thank you in advance for the assistanc...
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Line 6, column 40, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... Thank you in advance for the assistance Sincerely, Thadshayini baskaran
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Line 7, column 11, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... advance for the assistance Sincerely, Thadshayini baskaran
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, however, if, second, secondly, so, therefore, as to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 7.48453608247 160% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 4.92783505155 122% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 5.05154639175 40% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.03092783505 198% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 32.9175257732 85% => OK
Preposition: 22.0 26.3917525773 83% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.85567010309 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 778.0 937.175257732 83% => OK
No of words: 168.0 206.0 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.63095238095 4.54256449028 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.60020574368 3.78020617076 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.62168228302 2.54303337028 103% => OK
Unique words: 112.0 127.690721649 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.666666666667 0.622605031667 107% => OK
syllable_count: 239.4 290.88556701 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.13402061856 66% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 12.6804123711 63% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 16.3608247423 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 63.9311152726 44.8134815571 143% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.25 76.5299724578 127% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.0 16.8248392259 125% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.125 4.34317383033 210% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 7.0 4.29896907216 163% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 9.0 2.54639175258 353% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 7.41237113402 40% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.173659301134 0.216113520407 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0600403279002 0.0766984524023 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.073448326639 0.0603063233224 122% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0766422408279 0.12726935374 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0772496452142 0.0580467560999 133% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.9 8.37731958763 130% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 67.08 70.7449484536 95% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 7.45979381443 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.57 8.71597938144 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.5 7.59969072165 99% => OK
difficult_words: 30.0 41.2886597938 73% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 8.62886597938 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 8.54432989691 122% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 8.15463917526 135% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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