The two pie charts illustrate the proportion of United States of America's people's most favourite leisure activities in the year 1999 and 2009 as outcome of an observatio.
Overall, at the beginig of the period walking was the most popoular free time activity among the people of USA, while yoga was the least preferable to them. In comparison,at the end of the period it can clearly seen that walking remained the same position of people’s choice list and increased slightly, however jogging became the smallest part of the chart.
Swimming as a free time workout accounted for 9% in 1999 and experinced doubled increased which became 18% in 2009 and that was the biggest increased part of the pie charts.Soccer,camping and weightlifting were at 17%,8%, & 5% respectively at the 1st period of the decade and growth slightly to 18%,9% & 10% respectively in the last of the decade.Walking as a workout remained favourable to the USA's citizens in the both years 1999 & 2009 and it’s acceptance as lesiure activity increased only 2% from 29% to 31% after 10 year period.
Demand of aerobics as a rest time activity lost its populism almost 9% from 13% in 1999 to 4% in 2009.In 1999 bicycling was the third largest exoteric workout,but over the time it lost its glory and fell to 7% from 12%. Similarly jogging became the least significant part of the popularity was 3% in 2009.
- The following pie charts show the results of a survey into the most popular leisure activities in the United States of America in 1999 and 2009.Summaries the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. 73
- The two pie charts below show the online shopping sales for retail sectors in Canada in 2005 and 2010. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant 73
- Some people think that modern technology is making people more sociable, while others think it is making them less sociable. Discuss both views and give your opinion. 84
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, similarly, so, third, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.0 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 6.8 132% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 8.0 5.60731707317 143% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 39.0 33.7804878049 115% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.97073170732 76% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1155.0 965.302439024 120% => OK
No of words: 235.0 196.424390244 120% => OK
Chars per words: 4.91489361702 4.92477711251 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.91531732006 3.73543355544 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.96457975779 2.65546596893 112% => OK
Unique words: 131.0 106.607317073 123% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.557446808511 0.547539520022 102% => OK
syllable_count: 337.5 283.868780488 119% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.33902439024 23% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 8.94146341463 67% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 39.0 22.4926829268 173% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 144.926034775 43.030603864 337% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 192.5 112.824112599 171% => OK
Words per sentence: 39.1666666667 22.9334400587 171% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.5 5.23603664747 143% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 1.69756097561 589% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 3.70975609756 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.09268292683 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.166708708104 0.215688989381 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0982404448838 0.103423049105 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0883734018258 0.0843802449381 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.127658713832 0.15604864568 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0967876939264 0.0819641961636 118% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 21.3 13.2329268293 161% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.81 61.2550243902 80% => OK
smog_index: 13.0 6.51609756098 200% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 16.1 10.3012195122 156% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.79 11.4140731707 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.33 8.06136585366 116% => OK
difficult_words: 56.0 40.7170731707 138% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 11.4329268293 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 17.6 10.9970731707 160% => OK
text_standard: 18.0 11.0658536585 163% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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