Some people think that modern technology is making people more sociable, while others think it is making them less sociable. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
At present, by the blessing of science and modern technology humans life style has been changed ever before.Along with that, technology brings dramatic transformation in communication sector.A group of people believe that this improvement of communications makes people more social while others think differently.I assume that modern invention takes people far from socialism.
There are more causes that can compel one to go in favor of the statement that tech helps people to be more social.Men rely that technology like phone,mobile,computer,laptop,internet,TV, etc brings themselves more closer and helps to communicate each-other easily.Because through these media anyone can frequently meetup with his/her family or friends when they want.For example,using mobile phone or laptop one can enter social media like Facebook,Twitter etc. by a click and can know information of their familiar persons,also they can talk,chat,gossip with each-other.Even anyone can communicate others who is totally unknown and unfamiliar to him/herself.
On the other hand many people opine that technology creates people more antisocial than social.Today's people specially young generation keep themselves busy in hangouts over phone or social medias without going to communicate to the real world. For instance, it can be seen all over the society everyone is engaged in chatting via various apps,talking over phone,making videos, taking photos etc. for fake socialism without developing real relationship with true world.It become a common phenomenon that when someone fall in trouble or accident and need surrounding people help,almost everyone bring out their phones for taking videos or images instead of helping.I think modern technology fabricate people more self-centered and take them far from actual society they belongs.
To recapitulate,Modern gadgets collaborate everyone to enhance their social activity but most of them are being too much connected with those gadgets and social media. So it can said that technology become a barrier for socialism.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so, while, for example, for instance, i think, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 24.0651302605 129% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1757.0 1615.20841683 109% => OK
No of words: 301.0 315.596192385 95% => OK
Chars per words: 5.83720930233 5.12529762239 114% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.16525528304 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.74815031847 2.80592935109 134% => OK
Unique words: 186.0 176.041082164 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.617940199336 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 547.2 506.74238477 108% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 16.0721442886 50% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 37.0 20.2975951904 182% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 128.151704534 49.4020404114 259% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 219.625 106.682146367 206% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 37.625 20.7667163134 181% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.875 7.06120827912 140% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 29.0 5.01903807615 578% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.209657486908 0.244688304435 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0941747739152 0.084324248473 112% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0857394175789 0.0667982634062 128% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.140413723586 0.151304729494 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0884879106914 0.056905535591 155% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 24.9 13.0946893788 190% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 17.0 50.2224549098 34% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 14.6 7.44779559118 196% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 20.1 11.3001002004 178% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 17.18 12.4159519038 138% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.19 8.58950901804 119% => OK
difficult_words: 90.0 78.4519038076 115% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 31.5 9.78957915832 322% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 16.8 10.1190380762 166% => OK
text_standard: 17.0 10.7795591182 158% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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