The given column graph illustrates wage for staff of 06 aeronautical companys in 2018.
The given column graph illustrates wage for staff of 06 aeronautical companys in 2018.
Overall, pay of employee with 10 year of experience of airlines was quite high. On the other hand, salary of captain with 10 years work experience was higher than first officer in airlines.
In 06 aeronautical companys in 2018, income of staff of Cathay Pacific and Etihad was more outsanding. Standing at 162200 USD, the salary for pilots of Cathay Pacific was 18000 USD more than that of Etihad. The annual salary for first officer of Etihad was 101400 USD whereas that of Cathay Pacific stood at 106500 USD.
The annual salary for employee of Emirate, Thai Airways and Vietnam Airlines was follow close behind together. Emirates and Thai Ariways’s figure of average salary for captian had the similar number, at 126600 USD. However, annual salary of first office of Thai Airway was 95000 USD, 3800 USD more than the average salary of Emirates. Vietnam arilines pay salary for staff was the lowest. The average salary of captain in Vietnam Airline was 116500 USD, 136600 USD less than that of Cathay Pacific. Moreover, the income of first officer of Vietnam Airline was 69200 USD compared to 106500 USD of Cathay Pacific.
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Suggestion: followed
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Suggestion: compares
...fficer of Vietnam Airline was 69200 USD compared to 106500 USD of Cathay Pacific.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, however, if, moreover, whereas, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 7.0 143% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 6.8 44% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 3.0 5.60731707317 54% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 33.7804878049 104% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1014.0 965.302439024 105% => OK
No of words: 205.0 196.424390244 104% => OK
Chars per words: 4.94634146341 4.92477711251 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.78388967377 3.73543355544 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.29234039995 2.65546596893 86% => OK
Unique words: 94.0 106.607317073 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.458536585366 0.547539520022 84% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 306.0 283.868780488 108% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 6.0 4.33902439024 138% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 8.94146341463 134% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 22.4926829268 76% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 17.7127935559 43.030603864 41% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 84.5 112.824112599 75% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.0833333333 22.9334400587 74% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.66666666667 5.23603664747 89% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 1.69756097561 236% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.13902439024 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.09268292683 195% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.194565337488 0.215688989381 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.130192015998 0.103423049105 126% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.273325136732 0.0843802449381 324% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.295226724692 0.15604864568 189% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.409929355113 0.0819641961636 500% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.4 13.2329268293 79% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 61.2550243902 102% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 10.3012195122 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.13 11.4140731707 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.41 8.06136585366 92% => OK
difficult_words: 38.0 40.7170731707 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 11.4329268293 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.9970731707 80% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.