The given diagram illustrates the production, processing of milk and dairy products such as cheese, cream, and butter for the commercial purpose.
The given diagram illustrates the production, processing of milk and dairy products such as cheese, cream, and butter for the commercial purpose.
Overall, cows are the primary source of milk supply, with grass as the raw material. It is a manmade linear process consists of seven different steps with cows grazing as the starting and ends in the delivery of milk and milk-based products to the shops.
Now, looking into the details of producing and transporting the milk, cows’ intakes grass as its food and produce the milk, and the milk is extracted from the cows two times a day with the help of the milking machines, then the extracted milk is stored in large refrigeration container to avoid spoiling. Finally, the preserved milk is transported via the milk tanker once in a day to the diary machines.
After the delivery to the diary, the milk is processed to export as plain milk and dairy products such as cheese, cream, and butter. Once the milk is processed it is pasteurized and packed in a portable bottle, finally, the packages are available in the supermarkets and shops for the public.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, if, look, so, then, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.0 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 6.8 162% => OK
Relative clauses : 0.0 3.15609756098 0% => OK
Pronoun: 3.0 5.60731707317 54% => OK
Preposition: 22.0 33.7804878049 65% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 927.0 965.302439024 96% => OK
No of words: 189.0 196.424390244 96% => OK
Chars per words: 4.90476190476 4.92477711251 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.70779275107 3.73543355544 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.68174121675 2.65546596893 101% => OK
Unique words: 97.0 106.607317073 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.513227513228 0.547539520022 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 276.3 283.868780488 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.482926829268 621% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 8.94146341463 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 22.4926829268 120% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 68.3618822062 43.030603864 159% => OK
Chars per sentence: 132.428571429 112.824112599 117% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.0 22.9334400587 118% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.85714285714 5.23603664747 112% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 3.70975609756 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.09268292683 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.46145548712 0.215688989381 214% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.270032946234 0.103423049105 261% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.31984577814 0.0843802449381 379% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.398327267915 0.15604864568 255% => Maybe some contents are duplicated.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.362330370421 0.0819641961636 442% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.1 13.2329268293 114% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.53 61.2550243902 86% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.6 10.3012195122 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.44 11.4140731707 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.57 8.06136585366 119% => OK
difficult_words: 55.0 40.7170731707 135% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 11.4329268293 114% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.9970731707 116% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 11.0658536585 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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