The given Diagram shows Penetration of light In ocean

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The given Diagram shows Penetration of light In ocean

The given diagrammatic Representation highlights the information about The penetration of light to various depths through four zones with the temperature difference beneath the ocean. The data is calibrated in metres which is clearly and coherently representated.

It can be seen that, 0 metre the topmost covering of the surface of ocean having temperature constant with sky. Later on as we move down to first zone; sunlight zone it is upto 200m depth having a temperature of 5 degree centigrade. Moving further, second zone comes at 1000m depth which is Twilight zone. At this zone, temperature climbed to 3 degree Celsius.

Apart from all this, to a depth of 4000 m, third zone get started, which is commonly known as semi -dark zone, penetration of light has declined. Add semi-dark zone, temperature climbed 21 degree Celsius. Afterwards, the bottom zone; particularly called to be dark zone get started. It is the deepest and finest zone of the ocean, which comprises the length of 6000m; where temperature is supposed to be less than zero.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 71, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ntation highlights the information about The penetration of light to various dept...
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Line 3, column 170, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ove down to first zone; sunlight zone it is upto 200m depth having a temperature ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, second, third, apart from

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 7.0 143% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 6.8 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.15609756098 190% => OK
Pronoun: 7.0 5.60731707317 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 25.0 33.7804878049 74% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.97073170732 126% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 880.0 965.302439024 91% => OK
No of words: 173.0 196.424390244 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.08670520231 4.92477711251 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.62669911048 3.73543355544 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.90576143156 2.65546596893 109% => OK
Unique words: 110.0 106.607317073 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.635838150289 0.547539520022 116% => OK
syllable_count: 264.6 283.868780488 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 8.94146341463 112% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 22.4926829268 76% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 40.5414602598 43.030603864 94% => OK
Chars per sentence: 88.0 112.824112599 78% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.3 22.9334400587 75% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.6 5.23603664747 69% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 3.70975609756 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 4.09268292683 220% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.107579012823 0.215688989381 50% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.046857745339 0.103423049105 45% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0764797424631 0.0843802449381 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.101905731445 0.15604864568 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0791311534004 0.0819641961636 97% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.2 13.2329268293 85% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 61.2550243902 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 10.3012195122 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.95 11.4140731707 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.4 8.06136585366 104% => OK
difficult_words: 43.0 40.7170731707 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 11.4329268293 79% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.9970731707 80% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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