The given line chart illustrates the number of people changed between birth and death in Scotland over period 80 years between 1940 and 2020
The line graph represents the proportion of birth, population and death trends in Scotland from 1940 to 2010 and the prediction for until 2020. Overall, all the rates in Scotland plummeted and the population growth rate stopped since 2005, whereas the death rate remained unchanged for more than 50 years. It is notable that, all these trends will be continued until 2020.
There was a dramatic plunge in the proportion of birth rates in Scotland from 2.5% to 1.0% between 1940 and 2000, followed by death rates which witnessed a periodic decrease for over 20 years (1940 to 1960) from 1.5% to 0.5% and continued to be flat at 0.5% until 2000. In contrast, the population growth rate increased from 1.0% in 1940 to 1.5% in 1950, before it started to decline to reach at close to 0% in 2000 and there were no records for population growth rates in Scotland.
After 2000 till 2020, when growth rate is excluded, Scotland’s birth rates and death rates show a similar pattern but with a slow declining rate. Birth rates are expected to be below 1.0% whereas the death rates will be increase to reach at 1.0% by 2020.
- The charts below show the results of a survey about what people of different age groups say makes them most happy. 61
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Discourse Markers used:
['but', 'whereas', 'in contrast']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.264317180617 0.268076937826 99% => OK
Verbs: 0.123348017621 0.116061578633 106% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0440528634361 0.0759168565197 58% => OK
Adverbs: 0.00440528634361 0.0366838410393 12% => Some adverbs wanted.
Pronouns: 0.00881057268722 0.0131127313244 67% => OK
Prepositions: 0.167400881057 0.155750635184 107% => OK
Participles: 0.0308370044053 0.0379272487307 81% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.40402361406 2.65546596893 91% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0484581497797 0.0210936926555 230% => Less infinitives wanted.
Particles: 0.0 0.00175180941692 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.0660792951542 0.0948980150116 70% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.00881057268722 0.00437022459523 202% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.00881057268722 0.00967000014798 91% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1117.0 1161.00487805 96% => OK
No of words: 197.0 196.9 100% => OK
Chars per words: 5.67005076142 5.90752243213 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.74642080493 3.73763899035 100% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.253807106599 0.337110787985 75% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.203045685279 0.247514529752 82% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.152284263959 0.171178102325 89% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.0964467005076 0.112407865282 86% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.40402361406 2.65546596893 91% => OK
Unique words: 102.0 106.607317073 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.517766497462 0.546246751206 95% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
Word variations: 44.9948572239 49.3433353143 91% => OK
How many sentences: 7.0 8.93414634146 78% => OK
Sentence length: 28.1428571429 23.0094962315 122% => OK
Sentence length SD: 60.7826505859 42.9750493124 141% => OK
Chars per sentence: 159.571428571 135.714022679 118% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.1428571429 23.0094962315 122% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.428571428571 0.689975730869 62% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.84146341463 78% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.48048780488 0% => OK
Readability: 48.4474256708 47.7609492067 101% => OK
Elegance: 3.38709677419 2.94281807926 115% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.33999412243 0.418131533498 81% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.195915367428 0.181151798455 108% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.135283838434 0.0850326197045 159% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.69831197021 0.706616315825 99% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.166601297297 0.157042692854 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.18842606818 0.228904883108 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.120106727579 0.108899403657 110% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.351333829207 0.367819155151 96% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0469490659561 0.0812612215331 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.251861075655 0.316326947829 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0893293681183 0.0921553760075 97% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 3.70731707317 27% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 1.14146341463 438% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.08536585366 24% => More neutral sentences wanted.
Positive topic words: 1.0 3.16585365854 32% => OK
Negative topic words: 5.0 0.956097560976 523% => Less negative topic words wanted.
Neutral topic words: 0.0 3.02926829268 0% => More neutral topic words wanted.
Total topic words: 6.0 7.1512195122 84% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: This is not the final score. The e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.