The given line graph below illustrates the number of people moved from rural to urban areas of three different countries.
The line graph outlines how many individuals migrated and predicted to move from one place to another in Iran,Indonesia and Russia between 2000 and 2025.
Overall, it is evident that the highest number of migrating people was in Russia at the beginning of the period and the least occured in Iran. However, the latter will rank first at the end of the period. Moreover, the figure for Indonesia witnessed no significant change.
Looking at the details, there was a steady 20-million growth in the number of migrants of Indonesia from 2000 to 2020. Although, after 2020, the trajectory forecasted to level off, reaching its highest point at 30 million.
The rest of two trends experienced a general rise.There was a gradual increase in Russia from well under 20 million to just over 40 million between 2000 and 2010. After a half decade, the trend saw a precipitous rise by 30 million. From 2015 to 2025, the migrants of Russia projected grow. Furthermore, after 2005, the last trajectory depicts a general skyrocket till the end of the period, hitting its greatest peak of 95 million.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 110, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , Indonesia
...o move from one place to another in Iran,Indonesia and Russia between 2000 and 2025. Over...
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Line 3, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...nesia witnessed no significant change. Looking at the details, there was a stea...
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Line 4, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...hing its highest point at 30 million. The rest of two trends experienced a gen...
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Line 4, column 54, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: There
...f two trends experienced a general rise.There was a gradual increase in Russia from w...
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Line 4, column 423, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...the period, hitting its greatest peak of 95 million.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, furthermore, however, if, look, moreover, well
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.0 57% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 6.8 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.15609756098 32% => OK
Pronoun: 4.0 5.60731707317 71% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 33.7804878049 112% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.97073170732 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 904.0 965.302439024 94% => OK
No of words: 184.0 196.424390244 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.91304347826 4.92477711251 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.68302321012 3.73543355544 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.67777645958 2.65546596893 101% => OK
Unique words: 113.0 106.607317073 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.614130434783 0.547539520022 112% => OK
syllable_count: 262.8 283.868780488 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 8.0 4.33902439024 184% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.07073170732 280% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 8.94146341463 112% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 22.4926829268 80% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 39.324419894 43.030603864 91% => OK
Chars per sentence: 90.4 112.824112599 80% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.4 22.9334400587 80% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.3 5.23603664747 101% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 1.69756097561 295% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 3.70975609756 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.09268292683 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0924404490052 0.215688989381 43% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0364905907964 0.103423049105 35% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0445608719083 0.0843802449381 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0650574468296 0.15604864568 42% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0415321334694 0.0819641961636 51% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.9 13.2329268293 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 70.13 61.2550243902 114% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.9 10.3012195122 77% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.2 11.4140731707 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.31 8.06136585366 103% => OK
difficult_words: 44.0 40.7170731707 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 11.4329268293 74% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.9970731707 84% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.