In many parts of the world today there is a profitable market for products which lighten or whiten people's skin.
Outline the reasons for using such products and discuss what effects they have in terms of health and society.
It has been observed that in todays era so many products make profit out of face washes and buety produce which help to increase glow on skin many reasons could surface for such a rise and also some distinct influences can be expected. Both, the root causes as well as the impacts are elaborated in the ensuring paragraphs.
Discussing the reasons, the most common one is presentation. Many company gives more and more advertisements about their products. In addition, they take big models for their ads. which influence more people to buy their products. Furthermore, the high quality products gives instant glow on the skin and their skin look more brighten However, the perticular product work for a certain time limit. But, because of the instant impact more people
buy it. Also, the menufecurers gives hafte discount on the product which make grate impact on the buyers.
The mentioned causes have some Impacts too. The foremost effect is seen on financial states. These products are more costly which such a wast of money. It equally wast of time, these type of product consume take lots of time to apply as well as some more products use to removing like wipes and removing liqued and many more. Therefore, with use of these type of products severer skin problems also accers. Like pimples, and so on.
Thus, to conclude the topic, it can be finally commented that menufecture use several methods to sell their products which makes bad effects on
consumers. So, we should use more natural products and avoid using chemical products.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: and
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Suggestion: Which
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Message: “which” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...on, they take big models for their ads. which influence more people to buy their prod...
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Suggestion:
...skin problems also accers. Like pimples, and so on. Thus, to conclude the topi...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, furthermore, however, look, so, therefore, thus, well, in addition, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 41.998997996 67% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1292.0 1615.20841683 80% => OK
No of words: 261.0 315.596192385 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.95019157088 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0193898071 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.43047208395 2.80592935109 87% => OK
Unique words: 149.0 176.041082164 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.570881226054 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 405.9 506.74238477 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 7.0 2.52805611222 277% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 56.0871788049 49.4020404114 114% => OK
Chars per sentence: 76.0 106.682146367 71% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.3529411765 20.7667163134 74% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.76470588235 7.06120827912 82% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.38176352705 137% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 3.4128256513 234% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.297278294889 0.244688304435 121% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0868646307126 0.084324248473 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0616140826235 0.0667982634062 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.144550453423 0.151304729494 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0428349203183 0.056905535591 75% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.6 13.0946893788 73% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 56.25 50.2224549098 112% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.84 12.4159519038 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.68 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 78.4519038076 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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