goods transported in the UK 1974-2002

Essay topics:

goods transported in the UK 1974-2002

The given line graph illustrates the quantity of goods that were transported in the UK during 1974 and 2002. Especially, it is focused on the means of transportation that were used. The measurement of units is in million tones.

Overall, it seems that road transportation was the main way to ship products in this time period. In 1971, 70 millions tones of goods were delivered in this way, amount that decreased slightly in 1982 but gradually climed up to 100 millions in 2002.

Shipping lanes and Railway were approximately in the same levels until 1978, whereas, the latter started falling to a mere of 20 million tones the first was climbing to 60 milions. Both transportation forms rose after 1998 and 1994 ,respectively.

According to the graph, pipelines, appeares to be merely increased until 1994 reaching a peak at 20 milion of transported goods, amount that remained stable until 2002.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 191, Rule ID: NODT_DOZEN[1]
Message: Use simply: 'a million'.
Suggestion: a million
...at were used. The units are measured in million tones. Overall, it seems that road t...
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Line 3, column 133, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...riod. In 1971 70 millions tones of goods were delivered in this way , amount that...
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Line 3, column 161, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...nes of goods were delivered in this way , amount that decreased slightly in 1982 ...
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Line 5, column 78, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Whereas” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...ximately in the same Levels until 1978. Whereas the latter started falling to a mere of...
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Line 5, column 146, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...alling to a mere of 20 million tones the first was climbing to 60 milions. Both t...
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Line 5, column 232, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...portation forms rose after 1998 and 1994 ,respectively. According to the graph,...
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Line 7, column 128, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... peak at 20 milions of transported goods , amount that remained stable till 2002....
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Line 7, column 129, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...peak at 20 milions of transported goods , amount that remained stable till 2002.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, whereas

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.0 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 6.8 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.15609756098 158% => OK
Pronoun: 9.0 5.60731707317 161% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 26.0 33.7804878049 77% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 738.0 965.302439024 76% => OK
No of words: 148.0 196.424390244 75% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.98648648649 4.92477711251 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.48791127476 3.73543355544 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.76665863453 2.65546596893 104% => OK
Unique words: 97.0 106.607317073 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.655405405405 0.547539520022 120% => OK
syllable_count: 207.0 283.868780488 73% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 22.4926829268 71% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 41.665333312 43.030603864 97% => OK
Chars per sentence: 82.0 112.824112599 73% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.4444444444 22.9334400587 72% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.11111111111 5.23603664747 40% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 1.69756097561 471% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.09268292683 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.30165555662 0.215688989381 140% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.106812167376 0.103423049105 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.156381595633 0.0843802449381 185% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.177183708224 0.15604864568 114% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.11207008231 0.0819641961636 137% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.3 13.2329268293 78% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 72.16 61.2550243902 118% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 10.3012195122 70% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.37 11.4140731707 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.7 8.06136585366 108% => OK
difficult_words: 40.0 40.7170731707 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 11.4329268293 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.9970731707 76% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 11.0658536585 63% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?

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More content wanted.
Minimum 150 words wanted.

Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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