The graph and table below give information about water use worldwide and water consumption in two different countries .
The line chart illustrates the use of water by the three sectors globally while the table compares the water consumption in Brazil and Congo in 2000.
Overall, over the century, the use of water value by sector had an upward trend, whereas Brazil had the highest consumption per person.
It is noticeable that Agriculture group water usage had increased sharply its figures and marked as the highest amongst the sectors accounted for around 500km3 in 1900 to just above 3000km3 in the last year, 2000. While Industrial and Domestic use, it's recorded data relatively unchanged from 0km3 until 1940s.It started to went up by the year 1950s and peaked its value to just below 1000km3 and approximately 200km3 respectively in 2000.
The table displays that Brazil had 176million population as well as the largest in consuming water per capita with data of 359m3 as compared to Congo that a person consumed only 8m3 in 2000.
- The chart below indicates the primary uses of Internet in Japan in the years 1995 to 2005. 73
- The pie charts show the percentage of water used for different purposes in 6 areas of the world 73
- The chart below shows the number of male and female research students studying science related subjects at a UK University in 2009 56
- The table below shows the amount fish caught, in thousands tonnes , in 2008 and 2015 by eight European country. 84
- The graphs below show the primary social networking of British users in 2010 and projected figures for 2018. 61
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 311, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: It
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...he largest in consuming water per capita with data of 359m3 as compared to Congo ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
so, well, whereas, while, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 1.0 7.0 14% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 6.8 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 8.0 5.60731707317 143% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 25.0 33.7804878049 74% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.97073170732 76% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 774.0 965.302439024 80% => OK
No of words: 155.0 196.424390244 79% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.9935483871 4.92477711251 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.52844152537 3.73543355544 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.52460112138 2.65546596893 95% => OK
Unique words: 95.0 106.607317073 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.612903225806 0.547539520022 112% => OK
syllable_count: 225.0 283.868780488 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 1.53170731707 196% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 3.36585365854 30% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 5.0 8.94146341463 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 31.0 22.4926829268 138% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 35.1772653855 43.030603864 82% => OK
Chars per sentence: 154.8 112.824112599 137% => OK
Words per sentence: 31.0 22.9334400587 135% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.2 5.23603664747 138% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.09268292683 24% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.191062282878 0.215688989381 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.115634822128 0.103423049105 112% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0791962637708 0.0843802449381 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.136384376597 0.15604864568 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0762959534561 0.0819641961636 93% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.6 13.2329268293 133% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.47 61.2550243902 79% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 10.3012195122 138% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.25 11.4140731707 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.35 8.06136585366 116% => OK
difficult_words: 41.0 40.7170731707 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 11.4329268293 118% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.4 10.9970731707 131% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 11.0658536585 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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