The graph and table below give information about water use worldwide and water
consumption in two different countries.
The graph illustrates the changes of water use worldwide over a century span shown. The table presents the breakdown of water consumption in Brazil and Congo in 2000.
Overall, the trend of global water use in agriculture, industrial and domestic use increased. The water use in agriculture, industrial and domestic sectors was at a low level at the beginning, especially the industrial and domestic ones. The century saw a dramatic increase in global water use by agriculture, with 3000 km³ of water in 2000, which was almost 6 times more than it was 100 years ago. The growth of industrial and domestic use was stable at the previous five years. It was not until 1960 that water use in industrial and domestic sector started to climb faster, the growth rate of industrial use as twice as that in domestic use.
It is obvious that Brazil has a much bigger number than Congo, no matter in population, irrigated land or water consumption per person. Brazil has a population almost more than 30 times than that in Congo. However , the water consumption per capita is more than 40 times than that in Congo.
| Post date | Users | Rates | Link to Content |
|---|---|---|---|
| 2019-10-17 | 1653801012340 | 11 | view |
| 2019-10-17 | 1653801012340 | 61 | view |
| 2019-08-04 | V | 67 | view |
| 2018-01-25 | Eka Santi | 67 | view |
- Is local history more important than world history when it comes to what our schoolchildren should learn in class? 67
- The graph and table below give information about water use worldwide and waterconsumption in two different countries. 67
- The chart below shows the percentage of people who ate five portions of fruit and vegetables per day in the UK from 2001 to 2008. 78
- The charts below give information about levels of education in Glasgow, a city in Scotland, in 2010. 84
- The charts below show the levels of participation in education and science in developing and industrialised countries in 1980 and 1990. 73
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 400, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...6 times more than it was 100 years ago. The growth of industrial and domestic use w...
^^^
Line 5, column 214, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...han 30 times than that in Congo. However , the water consumption per capita is mor...
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.0 100% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 6.8 103% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.15609756098 190% => OK
Pronoun: 8.0 5.60731707317 143% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 25.0 33.7804878049 74% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.97073170732 126% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 919.0 965.302439024 95% => OK
No of words: 191.0 196.424390244 97% => OK
Chars per words: 4.81151832461 4.92477711251 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.71756304063 3.73543355544 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.66389321106 2.65546596893 100% => OK
Unique words: 95.0 106.607317073 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.497382198953 0.547539520022 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 285.3 283.868780488 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 8.0 4.33902439024 184% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 3.36585365854 30% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 8.94146341463 112% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 22.4926829268 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 34.8971345529 43.030603864 81% => OK
Chars per sentence: 91.9 112.824112599 81% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.1 22.9334400587 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.1 5.23603664747 21% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.13902439024 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.09268292683 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.171347650459 0.215688989381 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0864656819659 0.103423049105 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0597532064918 0.0843802449381 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.133109652773 0.15604864568 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0816120914354 0.0819641961636 100% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.8 13.2329268293 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 61.2550243902 99% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.3012195122 92% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.62 11.4140731707 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.56 8.06136585366 94% => OK
difficult_words: 36.0 40.7170731707 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 11.4329268293 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.9970731707 87% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.0658536585 72% => OK
What are above readability scores?
---------------------
Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
---------------------
Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.