The graph demonstrate average monthly weather and the average temperature , number of hours of sunshine annually in three type of cities.
In January three cities weather was different. Despite the winter in Sydney showed warm temperatures. Temperature decreased than previous month. In July instead of being hot the temperature again dropped. Weather showed twenty degrees since August. Then air reached twenty-five degrees in December.
In the graph London's line begin over five degrees and next month temperature slowly increase. Peak of line pointed about twenty-five degree in July and August. Air begins to cool to December.
In New York was low temperature in January. Next months weather rose significantly. New York was higher temperature than other cities. Table showed 30 degree in July. Then weather reduced to winter.
Three cities weather different but temperatures was similar in May. Cold city was Sydney, because weather was chilly in there. In December showed minus twenty-five degrees.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 74, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...thly weather and the average temperature , number of hours of sunshine annually in...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, may, then
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.0 100% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 6.8 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 0.0 3.15609756098 0% => OK
Pronoun: 0.0 5.60731707317 0% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 33.7804878049 74% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.97073170732 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 856.0 965.302439024 89% => OK
No of words: 154.0 196.424390244 78% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.55844155844 4.92477711251 113% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.52273666998 3.73543355544 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.71254840225 2.65546596893 102% => OK
Unique words: 91.0 106.607317073 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.590909090909 0.547539520022 108% => OK
syllable_count: 265.5 283.868780488 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.45097560976 117% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.33902439024 23% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 3.36585365854 178% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 8.94146341463 201% => Too many sentences.
Sentence length: 8.0 22.4926829268 36% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 24.8532110353 43.030603864 58% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 47.5555555556 112.824112599 42% => More chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 8.55555555556 22.9334400587 37% => More words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 1.0 5.23603664747 19% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 3.83414634146 130% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 3.70975609756 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 12.0 4.09268292683 293% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.272933983098 0.215688989381 127% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0828692921518 0.103423049105 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.106996154846 0.0843802449381 127% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.182621792087 0.15604864568 117% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.152108696185 0.0819641961636 186% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.0 13.2329268293 68% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.9 61.2550243902 90% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 10.3012195122 74% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.9 11.4140731707 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.93 8.06136585366 98% => OK
difficult_words: 38.0 40.7170731707 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 4.0 11.4329268293 35% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 5.2 10.9970731707 47% => Gunning_fog is low.
text_standard: 8.0 11.0658536585 72% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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