The graph and table below show the average monthly temperatures and the average number of hours of sunshine per year in three major cities

Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 8, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...in London, New York and Sydney. Overall , what stand out from the graph there are...
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Line 3, column 34, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...tion. Looking at the details as regards , the temperatures of Sydney in January a...
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Line 3, column 113, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: From
... and December were the same exactly 25°.From March to June the average temperatures ...
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Line 3, column 194, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
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Suggestion: In
...es declined gradually around 24° to 16°.In August and October temperatures in Sydn...
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Line 4, column 100, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
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Suggestion: Londons
...rose dramatically at around 28° and 24°.Londons and New Yorks lowest temperature was in...
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Line 4, column 116, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[2]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'Yorks the lowest'.
Suggestion: Yorks the lowest
...y at around 28° and 24°.Londons and New Yorks lowest temperature was in December approximate...
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Line 5, column 61, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...f hours of sunshine in Sydney were 2,473 , in New York 2,535 and lowest sunshine h...
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Line 5, column 133, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: It
...unshine hours were in London with 1.180.It is evident from the graph that the higg...
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Line 5, column 219, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...number of sunshine hours was in New York .
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, look, while, as regards

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.0 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 6.8 176% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 5.0 5.60731707317 89% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 33.7804878049 101% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 884.0 965.302439024 92% => OK
No of words: 176.0 196.424390244 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.02272727273 4.92477711251 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.64232057368 3.73543355544 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.77768888747 2.65546596893 105% => OK
Unique words: 89.0 106.607317073 83% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.505681818182 0.547539520022 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 266.4 283.868780488 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 5.0 8.94146341463 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 35.0 22.4926829268 156% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 43.9972726427 43.030603864 102% => OK
Chars per sentence: 176.8 112.824112599 157% => OK
Words per sentence: 35.2 22.9334400587 153% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.4 5.23603664747 103% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 3.83414634146 130% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 9.0 1.69756097561 530% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.09268292683 24% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.270951842159 0.215688989381 126% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.197704779894 0.103423049105 191% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.201085818407 0.0843802449381 238% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.197704779894 0.15604864568 127% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.201085818407 0.0819641961636 245% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 19.8 13.2329268293 150% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.41 61.2550243902 73% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.51609756098 172% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.8 10.3012195122 153% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.43 11.4140731707 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.88 8.06136585366 98% => OK
difficult_words: 28.0 40.7170731707 69% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 19.0 11.4329268293 166% => OK
gunning_fog: 16.0 10.9970731707 145% => OK
text_standard: 16.0 11.0658536585 145% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Maximum four paragraphs wanted.

Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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