The graph below compares changes in the birth rates of China and the USA between 1920-2000
The chart gives information about the comparison of the transformation in the birth rates of China and the USA during 80 years period from 1920 to 2000.
It is clear that there was a fluctuation in the portion of both countries in the same period. Moreover, China and USA decrease widely percentage at the end of the period.
Looking at the details, the rate of China stood at 10% in 1920, and then rose to reach the highest point of 20% in 1950. A constractive trend was recorded in the proportion of birth rates in the USA during the period, which hitted the bottom at 4,9% in 1945. Five years later, it witnessed an upward trend and peak at 15% in 1950.
After increasing significantly, the percentage of birth rates in both countries decreased dramatically in 1965 to 2000. China witnessed a huge declined after reaching in peaked in 1950 by 17% (from 20% to 3% in 2000). and similarity, the USA rate fall approximately 9% (from 15% to 6%). In addition, the amount of birth rates in the USA was 3 times higher than that of China.
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- The chart below gives information about population growth in three major Australian cities from 1992 to 2016 Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant
- The graph below compares changes in the birth rates of China and the USA between 1920 2000 73
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 217, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: And
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, look, moreover, so, then, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.0 57% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 6.8 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 4.0 5.60731707317 71% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 33.7804878049 133% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.97073170732 151% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 845.0 965.302439024 88% => OK
No of words: 188.0 196.424390244 96% => OK
Chars per words: 4.49468085106 4.92477711251 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.70287850203 3.73543355544 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.6705041377 2.65546596893 101% => OK
Unique words: 97.0 106.607317073 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.515957446809 0.547539520022 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 243.9 283.868780488 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 6.0 4.33902439024 138% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.482926829268 414% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 8.94146341463 112% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 22.4926829268 80% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 27.5610232031 43.030603864 64% => OK
Chars per sentence: 84.5 112.824112599 75% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.8 22.9334400587 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.1 5.23603664747 78% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.09268292683 171% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.296808765756 0.215688989381 138% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.127063983678 0.103423049105 123% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0846600777736 0.0843802449381 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.19484516409 0.15604864568 125% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.090557543746 0.0819641961636 110% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.1 13.2329268293 69% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 78.59 61.2550243902 128% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 10.3012195122 66% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.76 11.4140731707 77% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.89 8.06136585366 98% => OK
difficult_words: 40.0 40.7170731707 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 11.4329268293 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.9970731707 84% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.