The line graph represents a differentiation of the visitors who visited two newly musical web portals in 15 days period.
Overall, what stands out from the graph is that over 15 days periods for both websites the number of visitors swung heavily. According to the statistic, more people visit pop parade than music choice.
At the beginning day, almost 120000 people browse the pop parade website, after two consecutive days, the number remains almost the same. Then it begins to decrease up to day 9 and remains between 100000 and 30000. After that, in the next two days, it rises rapidly from 40000 to 150000, then drifts off to 80000 on the 13th day. On the 15th day, it climbs up to its highest number which is 170000.
Turning to the music choice, on the first day 40000 people enter this site, later it reduces to 20000. Then on the 3rd day, it suddenly jumps to 60000the climb down to again 20000 and up and down continues until day 11. During this period it stands steadily between 40000 and 20000. In the next two days, it upgrades significantly and has its most visitors which is 122000 and in the final day, it falls down to 78000.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, then
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.0 43% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 6.8 103% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.15609756098 158% => OK
Pronoun: 14.0 5.60731707317 250% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 39.0 33.7804878049 115% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 946.0 965.302439024 98% => OK
No of words: 206.0 196.424390244 105% => OK
Chars per words: 4.59223300971 4.92477711251 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.78849575616 3.73543355544 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.23526690477 2.65546596893 84% => OK
Unique words: 117.0 106.607317073 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.567961165049 0.547539520022 104% => OK
syllable_count: 252.9 283.868780488 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.2 1.45097560976 83% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 1.53170731707 326% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 3.36585365854 267% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 8.94146341463 123% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 22.4926829268 80% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 26.3172004841 43.030603864 61% => OK
Chars per sentence: 86.0 112.824112599 76% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.7272727273 22.9334400587 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.36363636364 5.23603664747 26% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.09268292683 195% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.115121206806 0.215688989381 53% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0492761726651 0.103423049105 48% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0469766985067 0.0843802449381 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0937135438124 0.15604864568 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0516867123681 0.0819641961636 63% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.6 13.2329268293 73% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 87.05 61.2550243902 142% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 5.6 10.3012195122 54% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 9.34 11.4140731707 82% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.06 8.06136585366 88% => OK
difficult_words: 33.0 40.7170731707 81% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 11.4329268293 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.9970731707 84% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.0658536585 90% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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