The line graph illustrates what amount of energy consumed in USA from non-renewable and renewable resources in 1980 compared with projection year 2030.
overall, the consumption of energy from almost all the resources grows maximum except hydropower and solar/wind. Significantly, petrol and fuel became the dominant source of energy over the given period.
In terms of petrol and fuel, the consumption from this resources increased gradually, experiencing some fluctuations, from 35Q.D in 1980 to around 45 in 2020.The figure is expected to rise alomst 50 Q.D till 2030. Similarly, in 1980,coal and natural gas consumptions were at around 17 and 20 respectively. Surprisingly, both derived increase collectively and reached 25Q.D till 2016. It is projected that the figure for coal will take a rise of 5Q.D, and for natural gas remain stable at almost 25 by 2030.
In case of remaining sources, nuclear, solar/wind and hydropower contributed less in energy from past to future. The figure for nuclear rose mildly from around 4Q.D in 1980 to 6Q.D in 2020.This figure is expected to stay at around 7 by 2030.Till 1990, solar/ wind and hydro consumptions were at equal (5Q.D).By 2030, both are projected to stay below 5Q.D.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, similarly, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.0 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 6.8 147% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.15609756098 32% => OK
Pronoun: 4.0 5.60731707317 71% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 33.7804878049 139% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.97073170732 76% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1032.0 965.302439024 107% => OK
No of words: 197.0 196.424390244 100% => OK
Chars per words: 5.2385786802 4.92477711251 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.74642080493 3.73543355544 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.93307908575 2.65546596893 110% => OK
Unique words: 120.0 106.607317073 113% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.609137055838 0.547539520022 111% => OK
syllable_count: 293.4 283.868780488 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.33902439024 115% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 3.36585365854 178% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 22.4926829268 93% => OK
Sentence length SD: 53.6568889183 43.030603864 125% => OK
Chars per sentence: 114.666666667 112.824112599 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.8888888889 22.9334400587 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.44444444444 5.23603664747 47% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 14.0 1.69756097561 825% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 3.70975609756 216% => Less positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.09268292683 24% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.173570514305 0.215688989381 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0722959700848 0.103423049105 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0511544493587 0.0843802449381 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.117973626699 0.15604864568 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0422420021234 0.0819641961636 52% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.2 13.2329268293 107% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 61.2550243902 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.3012195122 100% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.11 11.4140731707 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.2 8.06136585366 102% => OK
difficult_words: 44.0 40.7170731707 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 11.4329268293 101% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.9970731707 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.0658536585 90% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.