There is no doubt in saying that majority of companies giving opportunities to their employees to work from home.In my opinion,this is negative development in respect of being less involvement with working arrangements practically, measured potential level and personal life distractions.
The biggest negative development is, being less involved with operations by employees.when employees knowingly start taking advantage of option working from home,they find themselves sometimes alone working for the company targets. As a reason, employees' usually do better with their aligned colleagues when they appear at workplaces physically.So that, working from home do not make the employees focused on each working criteria ultimately brings loss for the campany at many situations.Another one is, the possibility of measuring the performance of each employee is very less.Actually, working in the teams with physical appearance becomes easy to identify the given targets of each one and review the output,but defining the clarity of each performance is very difficult in this option.
lastly, It is found very rare situations when an employees' personal life distractions get balanced longer. This is could be another trouble for them because personal life involves privacy,proper attendance and other important aspects of life.Which could become hamper for employees to make concentration on both sides either personal or professional at the same time.
In conclusion, working from home is no longer provides good results for the employees as well as company.It brings more negative developements in the professional life making balance on both sides and no practical working condition as whole.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, but, if, lastly, so, well, in conclusion, no doubt, as well as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1451.0 1615.20841683 90% => OK
No of words: 252.0 315.596192385 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.75793650794 5.12529762239 112% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.98428260373 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.21322488863 2.80592935109 115% => OK
Unique words: 154.0 176.041082164 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.611111111111 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 449.1 506.74238477 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 16.0721442886 37% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 42.0 20.2975951904 207% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 136.929929364 49.4020404114 277% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 241.833333333 106.682146367 227% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 42.0 20.7667163134 202% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 14.5 7.06120827912 205% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 12.0 5.01903807615 239% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 8.67935871743 12% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.317820435265 0.244688304435 130% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.168914028468 0.084324248473 200% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0850177914723 0.0667982634062 127% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.201728369962 0.151304729494 133% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0819496899128 0.056905535591 144% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 26.7 13.0946893788 204% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 11.93 50.2224549098 24% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 13.0 7.44779559118 175% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 22.0 11.3001002004 195% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 17.02 12.4159519038 137% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.48 8.58950901804 122% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 78.4519038076 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 20.5 9.78957915832 209% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 18.8 10.1190380762 186% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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