It goes without saying that participating in adventurous sports has always been a matter of debatable. some people think that extreme sports should be overrulled from the sporting events, whereas others believe that it should keep on continuing to raise the sense of achievement and tolerance.
To embark upon, there are many reasons that support why extreme sports should be listed out of the events. First and foremost, putting the life in danger just for the cause of victory is not always considered right. As a reason, adventurous sports consist more risk or threaten of life while performing which could not be easy anymore to any participant. For example, while performing in formula one race many drivers or performers either suffer from serious injury which may turn them to disabled forever, or get died. Secondly, sporting events have a relation with competition development but these extreme sports make the sporting events out of the competition and performance orientation.
On the other hand, gaining sense of achievement and satisfaction is considered more valuable for any game. Actually, these games teach being challenging and tolerant in any circumstances which are key to make satisfied to any participant.what is more, achieving those targets that no one even get closer to it is seems an exceptional and extraordinary work. Which is a biggest celebration to raise achievement at a big platform.Hence, these aspects are also marked while participating in extreme sports.
In conclusion, although extreme sports develop the sense of achievement and tolerance in a participant, but nothing could be more important than life sustainability.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, but, first, hence, if, may, second, secondly, so, whereas, while, for example, in conclusion, what is more, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 13.0 24.0651302605 54% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 41.998997996 74% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.3376753507 168% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1408.0 1615.20841683 87% => OK
No of words: 261.0 315.596192385 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.39463601533 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0193898071 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.09694697682 2.80592935109 110% => OK
Unique words: 153.0 176.041082164 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.586206896552 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 442.8 506.74238477 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.2647051388 49.4020404114 88% => OK
Chars per sentence: 128.0 106.682146367 120% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.7272727273 20.7667163134 114% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.8181818182 7.06120827912 182% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.165068341221 0.244688304435 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0659351176905 0.084324248473 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0662569224411 0.0667982634062 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.104657947934 0.151304729494 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0674969794116 0.056905535591 119% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.8 13.0946893788 121% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 39.67 50.2224549098 79% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.28 12.4159519038 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.77 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 66.0 78.4519038076 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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