The given line graph depicts the amount of energy consumed in America since 1980 with projected used until 2030.
What stands out from the graph is that fossil fuels have surpassed alternative energies since 1980 and are predicted to increase in the last 10 years. Petrol and oil have been the dominant energy used by U.S people over the period shown.
Fossil fuels are the main energy in the USA, among which petrol and oil accounted for the highest amount at 35 quad in 1980, followed by natural gas at 20 quad and coal at 15 quad which was below a half comparing with petrol and oil. From 1980 to 2020, Americans preferred using petrol and oil the most and tend to put this energy in use more and more until 2030. After a slight fluctuation, coal overtook natural gas and is supposed to become the second main energy consumption in this country in the future.
Surprisingly, the three mentioned renewable energies started at the same point about 3.5 quad, while there was a small surge in the consumption of nuclear and solar/ wind powers with slightly higher projection in 2030, the amount of energy created from hydropower witnessed a period of oscillation over the period shown.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 206, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: S
...have been the dominant energy used by U.S people over the period shown. Fossil f...
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Line 3, column 112, Rule ID: CD_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun 'quad' seems to be countable, so consider using: 'quads'.
Suggestion: quads
... accounted for the highest amount at 35 quad in 1980, followed by natural gas at 20 ...
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Line 3, column 176, Rule ID: CD_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun 'quad' seems to be countable, so consider using: 'quads'.
Suggestion: quads
...y natural gas at 20 quad and coal at 15 quad which was below a half comparing with p...
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Line 4, column 322, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...d of oscillation over the period shown.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
second, so, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.0 100% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 6.8 147% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 3.0 5.60731707317 54% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 33.7804878049 118% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.97073170732 126% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 983.0 965.302439024 102% => OK
No of words: 207.0 196.424390244 105% => OK
Chars per words: 4.74879227053 4.92477711251 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.79308509922 3.73543355544 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.33706605743 2.65546596893 88% => OK
Unique words: 117.0 106.607317073 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.565217391304 0.547539520022 103% => OK
syllable_count: 294.3 283.868780488 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 8.94146341463 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 29.0 22.4926829268 129% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 75.1786986765 43.030603864 175% => OK
Chars per sentence: 140.428571429 112.824112599 124% => OK
Words per sentence: 29.5714285714 22.9334400587 129% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.42857142857 5.23603664747 46% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 1.69756097561 236% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 3.70975609756 189% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.09268292683 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.315765217564 0.215688989381 146% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.148429527795 0.103423049105 144% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0921932614982 0.0843802449381 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.209147066763 0.15604864568 134% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0751787186401 0.0819641961636 92% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.7 13.2329268293 119% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 58.96 61.2550243902 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.2 10.3012195122 118% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.86 11.4140731707 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.43 8.06136585366 105% => OK
difficult_words: 44.0 40.7170731707 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 11.4329268293 114% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.6 10.9970731707 124% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 11.0658536585 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.