You should spend about 20 minutes on this task The graph below shows the proportion of the population aged 65 and over between 1940 and 2040 in three different countries Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make compa

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You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.
The graph below shows the proportion of the population aged 65 and over between 1940 and 2040 in three different countries.
Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparison where relevant.
Write at least 150 words.

The given line graph illustrates how many the ratio of people who was aged 65 and over from 1940 to 2040 in Japan, Sweden and America.
What stands out from the line graph is that both three different countries had a upward trend. In addition, Japan was saw a significantly decline before it is predicted that will rocket at the end of period.
In 1940, starting at a quite high point was America with about 9 percent. Following by Sweden and Japan that had lower proportion with roughly 7% and 5% respectively. Over 40 years, USA was still the highest with a substantially bounced to less than a fifths. While Sweden leap considerably to around 14% same America, Japan which nation declined slightly to roughly 3 percent before witnessing a steadily on more than 40 years.
Besides, Sweden is forecast will overtake America to become highest with about 19% on the period between 2020 and 2040. Both America and Japan are expected will have a significantly surge to around 14 percent and 10 percent respectively. On the final stage of prediction, there is a dramatically change when Japan which countries has a anticipation will rocket to more than a quarters. Furthermore, Sweden is also estimated will reach the second with 25 percent. It is America that expected will soar to roughly 23%.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 80, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...that both three different countries had a upward trend. In addition, Japan was s...
^
Line 2, column 107, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...untries had a upward trend. In addition, Japan was saw a significantly decline be...
^^
Line 2, column 119, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'sawed', 'sawn', 'seen'.
Suggestion: sawed; sawn; seen
...a upward trend. In addition, Japan was saw a significantly decline before it is pr...
^^^
Line 2, column 123, Rule ID: A_RB_NN[1]
Message: You used an adverb ('significantly') instead an adjective, or a noun ('decline') instead of another adjective.
...ward trend. In addition, Japan was saw a significantly decline before it is predicted that will rocket...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 250, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'a fifth' or simply 'fifths'?
Suggestion: a fifth; fifths
...th a substantially bounced to less than a fifths. While Sweden leap considerably to aro...
^^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 265, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...lly bounced to less than a fifths. While Sweden leap considerably to around 14% s...
^^
Line 4, column 166, Rule ID: A_RB_NN[1]
Message: You used an adverb ('significantly') instead an adjective, or a noun ('surge') instead of another adjective.
...merica and Japan are expected will have a significantly surge to around 14 percent and 10 percent res...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 4, column 281, Rule ID: A_RB_NN[1]
Message: You used an adverb ('dramatically') instead an adjective, or a noun ('change') instead of another adjective.
...the final stage of prediction, there is a dramatically change when Japan which countries has a antici...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 4, column 334, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...y change when Japan which countries has a anticipation will rocket to more than a...
^
Line 4, column 374, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'a quarter' or simply 'quarters'?
Suggestion: a quarter; quarters
...a anticipation will rocket to more than a quarters. Furthermore, Sweden is also estimated ...
^^^^^^^^^^
Line 4, column 423, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...s. Furthermore, Sweden is also estimated will reach the second with 25 percent. I...
^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, furthermore, if, second, so, still, while, in addition

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 7.0 157% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 1.00243902439 599% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 7.0 6.8 103% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 3.15609756098 253% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 6.0 5.60731707317 107% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 33.7804878049 110% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.97073170732 101% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1073.0 965.302439024 111% => OK
No of words: 222.0 196.424390244 113% => OK
Chars per words: 4.83333333333 4.92477711251 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.8600083453 3.73543355544 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.72515076959 2.65546596893 103% => OK
Unique words: 129.0 106.607317073 121% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.581081081081 0.547539520022 106% => OK
syllable_count: 325.8 283.868780488 115% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.33902439024 23% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 8.94146341463 134% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 22.4926829268 80% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 31.678944988 43.030603864 74% => OK
Chars per sentence: 89.4166666667 112.824112599 79% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.5 22.9334400587 81% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.75 5.23603664747 110% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 11.0 1.69756097561 648% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.09268292683 195% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0966554807926 0.215688989381 45% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0400500554896 0.103423049105 39% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0475454855716 0.0843802449381 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0765317680182 0.15604864568 49% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0428121035328 0.0819641961636 52% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.6 13.2329268293 80% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 61.2550243902 101% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.3012195122 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.73 11.4140731707 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.73 8.06136585366 96% => OK
difficult_words: 45.0 40.7170731707 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 11.4329268293 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.9970731707 84% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.

Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 80, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...that both three different countries had a upward trend. In addition, Japan was s...
^
Line 2, column 107, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...untries had a upward trend. In addition, Japan was saw a significantly decline be...
^^
Line 2, column 119, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'sawed', 'sawn', 'seen'.
Suggestion: sawed; sawn; seen
...a upward trend. In addition, Japan was saw a significantly decline before it is pr...
^^^
Line 2, column 123, Rule ID: A_RB_NN[1]
Message: You used an adverb ('significantly') instead an adjective, or a noun ('decline') instead of another adjective.
...ward trend. In addition, Japan was saw a significantly decline before it is predicted that will rocket...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 250, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'a fifth' or simply 'fifths'?
Suggestion: a fifth; fifths
...th a substantially bounced to less than a fifths. While Sweden leap considerably to aro...
^^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 265, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...lly bounced to less than a fifths. While Sweden leap considerably to around 14% s...
^^
Line 4, column 166, Rule ID: A_RB_NN[1]
Message: You used an adverb ('significantly') instead an adjective, or a noun ('surge') instead of another adjective.
...merica and Japan are expected will have a significantly surge to around 14 percent and 10 percent res...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 4, column 281, Rule ID: A_RB_NN[1]
Message: You used an adverb ('dramatically') instead an adjective, or a noun ('change') instead of another adjective.
...the final stage of prediction, there is a dramatically change when Japan which countries has a antici...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 4, column 334, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...y change when Japan which countries has a anticipation will rocket to more than a...
^
Line 4, column 374, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'a quarter' or simply 'quarters'?
Suggestion: a quarter; quarters
...a anticipation will rocket to more than a quarters. Furthermore, Sweden is also estimated ...
^^^^^^^^^^
Line 4, column 423, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...s. Furthermore, Sweden is also estimated will reach the second with 25 percent. I...
^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, furthermore, if, second, so, still, while, in addition

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 7.0 157% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 1.00243902439 599% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 7.0 6.8 103% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 3.15609756098 253% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 6.0 5.60731707317 107% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 33.7804878049 110% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.97073170732 101% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1073.0 965.302439024 111% => OK
No of words: 222.0 196.424390244 113% => OK
Chars per words: 4.83333333333 4.92477711251 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.8600083453 3.73543355544 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.72515076959 2.65546596893 103% => OK
Unique words: 129.0 106.607317073 121% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.581081081081 0.547539520022 106% => OK
syllable_count: 325.8 283.868780488 115% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.33902439024 23% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 8.94146341463 134% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 22.4926829268 80% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 31.678944988 43.030603864 74% => OK
Chars per sentence: 89.4166666667 112.824112599 79% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.5 22.9334400587 81% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.75 5.23603664747 110% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 11.0 1.69756097561 648% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.09268292683 195% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0966554807926 0.215688989381 45% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0400500554896 0.103423049105 39% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0475454855716 0.0843802449381 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0765317680182 0.15604864568 49% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0428121035328 0.0819641961636 52% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.6 13.2329268293 80% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 61.2550243902 101% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.3012195122 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.73 11.4140731707 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.73 8.06136585366 96% => OK
difficult_words: 45.0 40.7170731707 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 11.4329268293 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.9970731707 84% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.