The line gragh illustrates a 2008 survey about expenditure of energy in the US since 1980 including the predictions until 2030.
Overall,the gragh focuses on six kinds of energy: petrol and oil, coal, natural gas, nuclear, solar/wind, and hydropower and is measured by quarillion units. The utilization of petrol and oil is the highest initially, on the contrar, hydropower is the lowest of the graph. Almost all the utility have been increasing since 1980 except for natural gas and hydropower which are shown in broken lines.
In specific, The record which is predicted by 2030 is over 45 quadrillion units sold by 2030 belongs to Petrol and Oil, followed by Coal which is nearly 20 quadrillion individuals lower. Although natural gas started at a more tremendous point, it will have only raised almost 5 quadrillion units by the period of a half century.
Regarding the minority, Nuclear, Solar/Wind and Hydropower energy began at the same amount. The trend of solar/ wind and hydropower energy from 1980 to 2005 is unstable, after that they seperated into two direction, upward for solar/ wind power and downward for hydropower. However, the nuclear line has increased slightly and steadily from the beginning
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 8, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , the
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, regarding, so, except for
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.0 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 6.8 147% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 4.0 5.60731707317 71% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 33.7804878049 92% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1027.0 965.302439024 106% => OK
No of words: 198.0 196.424390244 101% => OK
Chars per words: 5.18686868687 4.92477711251 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.75116612262 3.73543355544 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.75271058592 2.65546596893 104% => OK
Unique words: 121.0 106.607317073 114% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.611111111111 0.547539520022 112% => OK
syllable_count: 308.7 283.868780488 109% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 6.0 4.33902439024 138% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 22.4926829268 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 34.6157032802 43.030603864 80% => OK
Chars per sentence: 114.111111111 112.824112599 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.0 22.9334400587 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.22222222222 5.23603664747 81% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 3.70975609756 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 1.13902439024 351% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.09268292683 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.104226010164 0.215688989381 48% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0474777210764 0.103423049105 46% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0561531697508 0.0843802449381 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0803138694339 0.15604864568 51% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0695041891663 0.0819641961636 85% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.0 13.2329268293 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 61.2550243902 80% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 10.3012195122 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.82 11.4140731707 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.35 8.06136585366 116% => OK
difficult_words: 58.0 40.7170731707 142% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 11.4329268293 101% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.9970731707 98% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.0658536585 108% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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