The three given graphs illustrate the number of sold albums in the UK of different kinds of music relied on gender and maturity.
Overall, the infomation provides three main types of music : Pop music, Rock music, and Classical music. It is clear that Pop music DVDs are the best seller among Rock music and Classical music and Classical music is on the opposite. The popularity of Rock and Pop music appears to be similar in almost ages or genders.
Regarding the gender, men always have greater interest in music than women through every kind of music on account of the provided statistics: about 9% higher in the first and second graph, and about 2% in the remaining graph.
According to the age, there are four age groups: 16-24, 25-34, 35-44 and over 45 years old. As mentioned, thanks to the first two graphs is almost the same, the highest proportion of both graphs belongs to the 25-34 year-old, followed by British at the age from 16-24 and 34-44 (almost 30% and nearly 25%). The elders who are over 45 are not so fascinated by Pop and Rock. On the contrary, other maturity groups are at the lowest rates while the middle-aged (over 45) are at the top of the third graph.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, regarding, second, so, third, while, kind of, on the contrary
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 7.0 143% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 6.8 176% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 2.0 5.60731707317 36% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 33.7804878049 107% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 976.0 965.302439024 101% => OK
No of words: 211.0 196.424390244 107% => OK
Chars per words: 4.62559241706 4.92477711251 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.81127787577 3.73543355544 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.2744459342 2.65546596893 86% => OK
Unique words: 123.0 106.607317073 115% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.582938388626 0.547539520022 106% => OK
syllable_count: 285.3 283.868780488 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.33902439024 115% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.482926829268 414% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 22.4926829268 102% => OK
Sentence length SD: 51.8654479529 43.030603864 121% => OK
Chars per sentence: 108.444444444 112.824112599 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.4444444444 22.9334400587 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.0 5.23603664747 153% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 3.70975609756 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.13902439024 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.09268292683 49% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.166656842831 0.215688989381 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0741471695301 0.103423049105 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0344975769882 0.0843802449381 41% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0965767865227 0.15604864568 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0194446742452 0.0819641961636 24% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.1 13.2329268293 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 65.05 61.2550243902 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.3012195122 96% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.87 11.4140731707 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.92 8.06136585366 98% => OK
difficult_words: 42.0 40.7170731707 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 11.4329268293 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.9970731707 102% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.0658536585 90% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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